constructive criticism on annotation.

i submited an annotated game to a site and would appreciate any constructive criticism on the annotation, its accuracy, and my play itself. its game 3 at: http://www.michael-boyd.net/annotated/

for convenience, could you post the link to that game here?

Edit: I found it, Game 2002485

Originally posted by nuclear chemist
for convenience, could you post the link to that game here?

Edit: I found it, Game 2002485