A Gift from me to the RHP Community

I wrote a song for you all during my lunchbreak today. Here goes:

I can see her lyin back in her satin dress
In a room where ya do what ya dont confess
Sundown ya better take care
If I find you been creepin round my back stairs
Sundown ya better take care
If I find you been creepin round my back stairs
Shes been lookin like a queen in a sailors dream
And she dont always say what she really means
Sometimes I think its a shame
When I get feelin better when Im feelin no pain
Sometimes I think its a shame
When I get feelin better when Im feelin no pain

I can picture every move that a man could make
Getting lost in her lovin is your first mistake
Sundown ya better take care
If I find you been creepin round my back stairs
Sometimes I think its a sin
When I feel like Im winnin when Im losin again

I can see her lookin fast in her faded jeans
Shes a hard lovin woman, got me feelin mean
Sometimes I think its a shame
When I get feelin better when Im feelin no pain
Sundown ya better take care
If I find you been creepin round my back stairs
Sundown ya better take care
If I find you been creepin round my back stairs
Sometimes I think its a sin
When I feel like Im winnin when Im losin again

I just felt creative and wanted to share...

Originally posted by Frank Burns
I wrote a song for you all during my lunchbreak today. Here goes:

I can see her lyin back in her satin dress
In a room where ya do what ya dont confess
Sundown ya better take care
If I find you been creepin round my back stairs
Sundown ya better take care
If I find you been creepin round my back stairs
Shes been lookin like a queen in a sailors ...[text shortened]... n
When I feel like Im winnin when Im losin again

I just felt creative and wanted to share...

Originally posted by Phlabibit
That is beautiful. I envision this song should be done with lots of slide-whistles, synths, and a cranking drum machine.

P-

Originally posted by Frank Burns
I wrote a song for you all during my lunchbreak today. Here goes:

I can see her lyin back in her satin dress
In a room where ya do what ya dont confess
Sundown ya better take care
If I find you been creepin round my back stairs
Sundown ya better take care
If I find you been creepin round my back stairs
Shes been lookin like a queen in a sailors ...[text shortened]... n
When I feel like Im winnin when Im losin again

I just felt creative and wanted to share...

Originally posted by Great Big Stees
Is it Frank Burns or Gordon Burns?

Originally posted by Phlabibit
Gordon Footburns?

Are you guys trying to imply that I swiped this song? 😠

Originally posted by Frank Burns
Are you guys trying to imply that I swiped this song? 😠

Originally posted by Great Big Stees
Who me?????? Never that's asking for litigation and I don't want anything to do with that.😏

Originally posted by Frank Burns
Always remember that me, Ice Cold, and rbmorris will come over there...

Originally posted by Phlabibit
Ohhhhh, the forum tuffs!

Pftt, please!

P-

Originally posted by Frank Burns
Always remember that me, Ice Cold, and rbmorris will come over there...

Originally posted by Frank Burns
Always remember that me, Ice Cold, and rbmorris will come over there...

Originally posted by Great Big Stees
Come on Frankie boy....if that's really your name....bring it on.😠

nice song frank lightfoot