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A story I am writing:

A story I am writing:

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So I was thinking about aliens and what they would look like and I came up with these two warring species on this spectacular planet about 10,000 light years from earth. They can do feats of aerial manouvers that would make a bumblebee green with envy. They had this war and they are very small compared to us, the size of flea's. One of them, the fudians, started an attack on the main city of justina where the spolans lived, high on a plateau overlooking an incredible mountain range. The fighting went on for weeks and months and finally the fundians got weary and left or pretended to leave. They actually left a present for the spolanians, a rather large, for them, flying machine, but with 50 spolian warriers inside. Yes folks, its the story of the Trojan Horsefly. The spolians however, had heard of such a trick and they defeated the 'gift', Yep, you got it, with a Trojan Horseshoe! So thats the general plot. I have a sequel in mind also, its called the Trojan Horsefeather.....

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Originally posted by sonhouse
So I was thinking about aliens and what they would look like and I came up with these two warring species on this spectacular planet about 10,000 light years from earth. They can do feats of aerial manouvers that would make a bumblebee green with envy. They had this war and they are very small compared to us, the size of flea's. One of them, the fudians, st ...[text shortened]... thats the general plot. I have a sequel in mind also, its called the Trojan Horsefeather.....
It's not very long.

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Originally posted by sonhouse
So I was thinking about aliens and what they would look like and I came up with these two warring species on this spectacular planet about 10,000 light years from earth. They can do feats of aerial manouvers that would make a bumblebee green with envy. They had this war and they are very small compared to us, the size of flea's. One of them, the fudians, st ...[text shortened]... thats the general plot. I have a sequel in mind also, its called the Trojan Horsefeather.....
You could always use a giant flyswatter, or capture them in a giant Trojan 😲

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Originally posted by reader1107
You could always use a giant flyswatter, or capture them in a giant Trojan 😲
Speaking of stories, how did your nanowriming go?

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Originally posted by Nordlys
Speaking of stories, how did your nanowriming go?
😳😳😳😳😳

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Originally posted by reader1107
😳😳😳😳😳
hahah! me too...

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Originally posted by wormwood
hahah! me too...
My people have been in the same spot for weeks, staring at this thing...

they must be tired by now!

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Originally posted by reader1107
My people have been in the same spot for weeks, staring at this thing...

they must be tired by now!
I hope you wrote them some chairs, reading and maybe even some light snacks. it'll be 11 months until the action starts again.



but they'll always have nanowrimoblanca.