false haiku

beginning
second thought
how to say
no one to understand
leaving

( note, the initial blankness was the haiku..the true haiku. ).

Originally posted by mister moggy
beginning
second thought
how to say
no one to understand
leaving

monkey
little monkey
monkey see and
monkey see and do
monkey

vision
truth seen
you are monkey
for you see mirror
darwin

love
no love
desire to be
no desire to be
monkey

eat
breed more
leave out excrement
eat, breed more, excrement
darwin

star
periodic blessing
hand of Father
life begins in beauty
man

Originally posted by mister moggy
beginning
second thought
how to say
no one to understand
leaving
Well, @mister-moggy
Don't let the door hit your behind
On your way out.rating;;;

( my return reply...to the idiot who does not see the bag over his head ) .

monkey
chess rating
you see "truth"
you live in ego
checkmate
"

Originally posted by mister moggy
Originally posted by mister moggy
beginning
second thought
how to say
no one to understand
leaving
Well, @mister-moggy
Don't let the door hit your behind
On your way out.rating;;;

( my return reply...to the idiot who does not see the bag over his head ) .

monkey
chess rating
you see "truth"
you live in ego
checkmate
"

biology
truth told
poetry uses terms
biology is not truth
monkey

Originally posted by mister moggy
biology
truth told
poetry uses terms
biology is not truth
monkey

word
word drawn
the cutting phrase
the comma salves wounds
...

redness
monkey face
it speaks largeness
not enough motherly love
ego