haiku does not rhyme, dammit

if you write haiku
and no one is there to hear
is it true haiku?

The sun's warmth reveals
And teases a zest for life.
A fleeting smile.

I smile at the rain,
dance in the puddles it leaves,
happy now I sleep.

once upon a time
DO NOT WRITE HAIKU LIKE THIS
and now, breathe deeply

@ghost-of-a-duke said
I smile at the rain,
dance in the puddles it leaves,
happy now I sleep.

Haiku reminds me
of pretentious chai drinkers
The Blackbird says "stop"

@neilarini said
The sun's warmth reveals
And teases a zest for life.
A fleeting smile.

@caesar-salad said
Haiku reminds me
of pretentious chai drinkers
The Blackbird says "stop"

stray dog looking scared
city streets are hard on you
I too am limping

@rookie54

It is true, haiku
it does not rhyme with dammit.
Have you tried slam it?

snow on black branches
the air is wet, cold, and fresh
where is the kettle?

A computer haiku (from the über-nerd):

Corrupted data
Electric oblivion
Order is fleeting

sand, pebbles, gravel
soil, compost, life giving rain
flourishing flowers blooming

@rookie54 said
sand, pebbles, gravel
soil, compost, life giving rain
flourishing flowers blooming

hunger eats belly
knobbly drenched in butter
Refreshing filler