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Originally posted by Nordlys
In fact, modern hai-
kus can be a lot more free.
Modern writers won't let the syllable count stop them.
They stink. I'm old school.
You need to make it all fit.
Anything less sucks.
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Originally posted by abejnood
Any moron can
write a haiku. Just stop at
the seventeenth sy
A very good point
and so very well written
yet still incomplete
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Originally posted by reader1107
Just blame the Faith Whale!
Our Axis of Evil will
bail her out later
Blaming the Faith Whale
Is a big No No No No
No No No No No!
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Originally posted by Phlabibit
They stink. I'm old school.
You need to make it all fit.
Anything less sucks.
An old school haiku
Should refer to a season.
The words fall like snow.
Where I belong
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Originally posted by Nordlys
Blaming the Faith Whale
Is a big No No No No
No No No No No!
The Whale is guilty
Johnny Depp is now deceased
Yes it was the whale
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Originally posted by Nordlys
An old school haiku
Should refer to a season.
The words fall like snow.
Is that two seasons?
Fall for autumn and snow for
winter. I don't know
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Originally posted by Nordlys
An old school haiku
Should refer to a season.
The words fall like snow.
Time for a picnic
with tea and muffins, perfect
spelling and grammar
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Originally posted by mokko
The Whale is guilty
Johnny Depp is now deceased
Yes it was the whale
"The Whale was beguiled"
Is that what you meant to say?
But you are still wrong.
Edit: Just noticed
Your edit. You were quite fast!
But still wrong, of course.
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Originally posted by orangutan
What is a Haiku
Can anyone tell me?
I would love to know
It's what you say when
Your spraying spit and snot
Excuse you a lot
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Originally posted by reader1107
Time for a picnic
with tea and muffins, perfect
spelling and grammar
Kitty played guitar
rocking and rolling all night
the crowd sang along
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Originally posted by orangutan
Is that two seasons?
Fall for autumn and snow for
winter. I don't know
The snow and the words
Were falling in winter, but
Some might fall in fall.
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Noodles shot Johnny
it was in the drawing room
with the revolver
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Originally posted by reader1107
Time for a picnic
with tea and muffins, perfect
spelling and grammar
I am up for it!
Let us go to the clique beach
And have a cliquenique!
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Originally posted by Nordlys
The snow and the words
Were falling in winter, but
Some might fall in fall.
Autumn is English
but 'Fall' is American.
Snow is just cold
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Originally posted by orangutan
Autumn is English
but 'Fall' is American.
Snow is just cold
I know that. But why
Is your haiku missing a
Syllable again?
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