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Hard about (poem)

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I read the news, nothing new
People dying and some dispute
wealth and power, trivial things
cracking broken feathered wings

So, hard about!

I read the papers, nothing there
Same old whinging, same affairs
People change and all is past
All end up the same so fast

So, hard about!

I watch the tele, going stale
thoughts and promises kept in jail
you'd think by now that there would be
something inspiring for us to see

So, hard about!

But Bush, Iraq, war and oil
Earth and future all spoiled
Same thing now as when the powers
ruled the world from seven towers

So, hard about!

Muhammed's taboo and religion strong
though to me he's all about wrong
same old lyrics of mind control
and people buy it for they need a goal

So, hard about!

What they seek and cannot find
they seek in posing greater mind
not realising they're all the same
the advisers in their foul game

So, hard about!

Promises broken, nothing gained
Presidents and dictators keep us chained
Ruling their lands without heart
A bunch of focking retards

So, hard about!

You're all so dumb, I can't believe
you sitting there as they weave
their clothed cover to dim your sight
To make your world ever white

So, hard about!

Yet from the corners, plain to see
If you've kept track at things from seed
A plan to gain complete control
over your life and tainted soul

So, hard about!

Nae, what am I talking about?
I'm sure it's nothing or it would be loud
How can anything this slow and sweet
be dangerous to you and me?

So, hard about!

I'll rest for now, just a little while longer
I don't care whomever grows stronger
Why would I fight for something like this?
So, hard about! And we cannot miss!

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I never considered you a Dolly Parton fan.

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Oh, that's great. You write a 'poem' that's supposed to say something you
feel is important, and the response is: the meter is identical a Dolly
Titqueen song. Fancy that. You just couldn't handle the actual contents of it,
am I right? 😛

Why not just keep your mouth shut? And before you say anything, I'm
licensed to spew crap by virtue of being me, so don't even go there.

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Originally posted by stocken
Oh, that's great. You write a 'poem' that's supposed to say something you
feel is important, and the response is: the meter is identical a Dolly
Titqueen song. Fancy that. You just couldn't handle the actual contents of it,
am I right? 😛

Why not just keep your mouth shut? And before you say anything, I'm
licensed to spew crap by virtue of being me, so don't even go there.
Yo stocken, nice poem

I don't know if you've noticed, but it's pretty similar to a dolly Dolly Parton song.

Great song.

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Originally posted by knightwest
I don't know if you've noticed, but it's pretty similar to a dolly Dolly Parton song.

Great song.
😵

Damn you!!!

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Originally posted by stocken
😵

Damn you!!!
Just thought I'd mention it to you.

Whispers: you know, before anyone else does

S
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Originally posted by stocken
I read the news, nothing new
People dying and some dispute
wealth and power, trivial things
cracking broken feathered wings

So, hard about!

I read the papers, nothing there
Same old whinging, same affairs
People change and all is past
All end up the same so fast

So, hard about!

I watch the tele, going stale
thoughts and promises kept in ja ...[text shortened]... nger
Why would I fight for something like this?
So, hard about! And we cannot miss!
It's excellent and though provoking. You got guts posting in here, honey.

😉

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Originally posted by Sunburnt
You got guts posting in here, honey.
Nnno, I'm really just very stupid. But thank you so much for those kind
words. I suck them up like a dry sponge. More. More. 😏

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Originally posted by stocken
Nnno, I'm really just very stupid. But thank you so much for those kind
words. I suck them up like a dry sponge. More. More. 😏
Maybe you are stupid??!! 😵 Or simply crazy? I would never post my poems in here for these animals! 😛

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Originally posted by stocken
Nnno, I'm really just very stupid. But thank you so much for those kind
words. I suck them up like a dry sponge. More. More. 😏
Oh, I forgot.....more compliments......hmmm.

You are brilliant.
You are a true wordsmith.
You are an excellent typist.

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Originally posted by Sunburnt
Oh, I forgot.....more compliments......hmmm.

You are brilliant.
You are a true wordsmith.
You are an excellent typist.
Ar, yes! That I am. That I am. 😏

And may I return the favour by saying yer a fine woman? A fine woman indeed. 😀

S
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Originally posted by stocken
Ar, yes! That I am. That I am. 😏

And may I return the favour by saying yer a fine woman? A fine woman indeed. 😀
Are you doing a pirate thing now?

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