...all on my own. Uhm, I thought long and hard and, hu... this is what I came up with. I'm sure you can all see how incredibly original I really am.
(I'm thinking a steady drumbeat covered by a nice, soft bass for the background and a funky (kindof) guitar going: da-da-dam, da-da da-da da-da-dam)
We don't need no education.
We don't need no thought control.
No dark sarcasm in the classroom.
Teacher, leave them kids alone.
Hey! Teacher! Leave them kids alone!
All in all it's just another brick in the wall.
All in all you're just another brick in the wall.
(And here I thought it would be nice if we could get a bunch of kids singing to add some realism to it: )
We dont need no education.
We dont need no thought control.
No dark sarcasm in the classroom.
Teachers, leave us kids alone.
Hey! Teacher! Leave us kids alone!
All in all you're just another brick in the wall.
All in all you're just another brick in the wall.
(And here, of course, like any good music, a guitar solo. I will play it like noone else can adding an emotion of such exquisite intensity you will feel your entire chest fill up with joy.)
(And after that a bunch of grumpy teachers making comments about cleaning your feet and eating your pudding.)
So! What do you think people. Am I great or what? 😀
Originally posted by stockenBrilliant - sounds ever so slightly familiar - I guess that's part of the knack of songwriting - well done. 😉
...all on my own. Uhm, I thought long and hard and, hu... this is what I came up with. I'm sure you can all see how incredibly original I really am.
(I'm thinking a steady drumbeat covered by a nice, soft bass for the background and a funky (kindof) guitar going: da-da-dam, da-da da-da da-da-dam)
We don't need no education.
We don't need no thought c ...[text shortened]... r feet and eating your pudding.)
So! What do you think people. Am I great or what? 😀
Originally posted by wormwoodAnd I don't even have a plot yet!!!! Well, I have a couple ideas, but one of them isn't really one I want to live with for a month. The other has some potential ...
but does it have the time! -there some nanowrimoeing to be nanowrimoed that's not gonna nanowrimo itself!
😲😲😲😲
Originally posted by stockenIt's been done before, mate. 😀
...all on my own. Uhm, I thought long and hard and, hu... this is what I came up with. I'm sure you can all see how incredibly original I really am.
(I'm thinking a steady drumbeat covered by a nice, soft bass for the background and a funky (kindof) guitar going: da-da-dam, da-da da-da da-da-dam)
We don't need no education.
We don't need no thought c ...[text shortened]... r feet and eating your pudding.)
So! What do you think people. Am I great or what? 😀
Originally posted by stockenI have another up my sleeve though. It's about love and how I wish for that special someone to see me. I'm thinking a piano in the background here:
Oh, sweet heavens no! And I really thought I was so original there. 😠
😛
I've been alone with you inside my mind
And in my dreams I've kissed your lips a thousand times
I sometimes see you pass outside my door
Hello, is it me you're looking for?
I can see it in your eyes
I can see it in your smile
You're all I've ever wanted and my arms are open wide
'Cause you know just what to say
And you know just what to do
And I want to tell you so much:
I love you
(And here we've got like drums and bass entering the sonic picture: )
I long to see the sunlight in your hair
And tell you time and time again how much I care
Sometimes I feel my heart will overflow
Hello, I've just got to let you know
'Cause I wonder where you are
And I wonder what you do
Are you somewhere feeling lonely or is someone loving you?
Tell me how to win your heart
For I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying:
I love you
(Actually, I think I'll have the orchestra enter the picture here with a nice solo to go with it - Reader? )
Hello, is it me you're looking for?
'Cause I wonder where you are
And I wonder what you do
Are you somewhere feeling lonely or is someone loving you?
Tell me how to win your heart
For I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying:
I love you
Originally posted by stockenwow! you are just so talented when bored. let me guess, a future Rob Zombie song 😀
I have another up my sleeve though. It's about love and how I wish for that special someone to see me. I'm thinking a piano in the background here:
I've been alone with you inside my mind
And in my dreams I've kissed your lips a thousand times
I sometimes see you pass outside my door
Hello, is it me you're looking for?
I can see it in your eyes
I c ...[text shortened]... your heart
For I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying:
I love you
Originally posted by stockenI LOVE that song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have another up my sleeve though. It's about love and how I wish for that special someone to see me. I'm thinking a piano in the background here:
I've been alone with you inside my mind
And in my dreams I've kissed your lips a thousand times
I sometimes see you pass outside my door
Hello, is it me you're looking for?
I can see it in your eyes
I c ...[text shortened]... your heart
For I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying:
I love you
Um, I mean, great job! Carry on!
