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Sleeping with the Fishes
by Helen Ivory



When I was a goldfish you never noticed me.
Every day I would watch you eat breakfast.
I knew your favourite cereal, how many times
you would chew before you swallowed each spoonful.

On Tuesdays and Thursdays you worked late.
You bought Chinese food and ate in front of the TV.
This invariably gave you indigestion.
I did worry about you - you always looked so tired.

At night I would circle round while you could not sleep.
I would sing you lullabies that you could not hear.
Sweet tunes to drift you away to a place I would never go,
until the light of morning broke through the dirty window.

When one night you didn't come back from work,
I watched the mail pile up for days, alone in your empty house.
The phone rang once, but I couldn't reach it.
Was it you? Did you phone me? Did you?

I dreamt you chose to swim with me.
You liked the patterns light makes on the surface.
How the world distorts with each turning tide
as icy water soothed your tired eyes.

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Originally posted by murrow
Sleeping with the Fishes
by Helen Ivory



When I was a goldfish you never noticed me.
Every day I would watch you eat breakfast.
I knew your favourite cereal, how many times
you would chew before you swallowed each spoonful.

On Tuesdays and Thursdays you worked late.
You bought Chinese food and ate in front of the TV.
This invariably gave you in ...[text shortened]... surface.
How the world distorts with each turning tide
as icy water soothed your tired eyes.
I like that.

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Originally posted by murrow
Sleeping with the Fishes
by Helen Ivory



When I was a goldfish you never noticed me.
Every day I would watch you eat breakfast.
I knew your favourite cereal, how many times
you would chew before you swallowed each spoonful.

On Tuesdays and Thursdays you worked late.
You bought Chinese food and ate in front of the TV.
This invariably gave you in ...[text shortened]... surface.
How the world distorts with each turning tide
as icy water soothed your tired eyes.
a lovely poem, thank you for sharing itπŸ™‚

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Originally posted by rbmorris
I like that.
I didn't.

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Originally posted by Bowmann
I didn't.
thanks for sharing

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Originally posted by murrow
thanks for sharing
Try reading a proper poem:

http://www.redhotpawn.com/board/showthread.php?threadid=42952&page=5

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Originally posted by Bowmann
Try reading a [b]proper poem:

http://www.redhotpawn.com/board/showthread.php?threadid=42952&page=5[/b]
i tried but it didn't work.

it turns out i can only read fake poems.

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Originally posted by murrow
i tried but it didn't work.

it turns out i can only read fake poems.
Loser.

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Originally posted by Bowmann
Try reading a [b]proper poem:

http://www.redhotpawn.com/board/showthread.php?threadid=42952&page=5[/b]
Disturbing...nice.

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Originally posted by murrow
Sleeping with the Fishes
by Helen Ivory



When I was a goldfish you never noticed me.
Every day I would watch you eat breakfast.
I knew your favourite cereal, how many times
you would chew before you swallowed each spoonful.

On Tuesdays and Thursdays you worked late.
You bought Chinese food and ate in front of the TV.
This invariably gave you in ...[text shortened]... surface.
How the world distorts with each turning tide
as icy water soothed your tired eyes.
it was good, but it seemed unfinnished. Am i the only one who got that feeling?

easy on the eyes though, not too wordy


πŸ™‚

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Originally posted by rbmorris
nice
😞

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Originally posted by huckleberryhound
it was good, but it seemed unfinnished. Am i the only one who got that feeling?

easy on the eyes though, not too wordy


πŸ™‚
😞

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Originally posted by Bowmann
😞
😴

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Originally posted by huckleberryhound
it was good, but it seemed unfinnished. Am i the only one who got that feeling?

easy on the eyes though, not too wordy


πŸ™‚
I think the fish died of starvation before it could finish the poem. πŸ™

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Originally posted by Nordlys
I think the fish died of starvation before it could finish the poem. πŸ™
We can only be thankful.