I would like to make me a cool million and would like to write a plot for story book that I could sell to some biga$$ publisher. I have thought of a few characters and story-lines in a plot.I would appreciate anyone's help in putting together the plot.
Here are some of the characters
- the green man (wants to go to North Korea to teach em chess). Has awful dress sense.
- the pumpkin eater (a man who dresses as a woman who then pretends to be a man. Got big hairy legs).
- the skater (haven't thought of plot, pre-op tranny from Philly)?
Originally posted by kopatovOnce upon a time a returnee, kopatov, aka the green man went to North Korea. When there he met his twin brother, cludee, who loved eating pumpkins and was also a champion figure skater.
I would like to make me a cool million and would like to write a plot for story book that I could sell to some biga$$ publisher. I have thought of a few characters and story-lines in a plot.I would appreciate anyone's help in putting together the plot.
Here are some of the characters
- the green man (wants to go to North Korea to teach em chess). Has awf ...[text shortened]... man. Got big hairy legs).
- the skater (haven't thought of plot, pre-op tranny from Philly)?
The end
Originally posted by kopatovStarts with a buss driver saying, "OH CRAP"!~ You can see it's rainy outside the buss, and something is illuminating the driver and the 3 passengers of the buss (our main characters).
I would like to make me a cool million and would like to write a plot for story book that I could sell to some biga$$ publisher. I have thought of a few characters and story-lines in a plot.I would appreciate anyone's help in putting together the plot.
Here are some of the characters
- the green man (wants to go to North Korea to teach em chess). Has awf ...[text shortened]... man. Got big hairy legs).
- the skater (haven't thought of plot, pre-op tranny from Philly)?
The 3 characters all look at each other like "WHAT UP!?~"
Next, it is flashback time... and the story of WHY each person is on this buss. These would be pretty detailed stories, each ending with them getting on the buss.
After all three stories are told, and everyone watching the movie forgets how the movie started we flash back to the buss and driver plowing into a train.
-=THE END=-
Originally posted by PhlabibitBuss driver? Shouldn't they have gotten a bus driver instead?
Starts with a buss driver saying, "OH CRAP"!~ You can see it's rainy outside the buss, and something is illuminating the driver and the 3 passengers of the buss (our main characters).
The 3 characters all look at each other like "WHAT UP!?~"
Next, it is flashback time... and the story of WHY each person is on this buss. These would be pretty detai ...[text shortened]... the movie started we flash back to the buss and driver plowing into a train.
-=THE END=-
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Originally posted by PhlabibitYou have to make one of the characters into a drug smuggling people trafficking pimp or something so people can go, auu sad ending but YEAH!!! glad that drug smuggling people trafficking pimp was killed.
Starts with a buss driver saying, "OH CRAP"!~ You can see it's rainy outside the buss, and something is illuminating the driver and the 3 passengers of the buss (our main characters).
The 3 characters all look at each other like "WHAT UP!?~"
Next, it is flashback time... and the story of WHY each person is on this buss. These would be pretty detai ...[text shortened]... the movie started we flash back to the buss and driver plowing into a train.
-=THE END=-
Originally posted by kopatov😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴
The skater on joining RHP went immediately to the General forum and announced he was the greatest playa EVAH~ Cheater, cheater, pumpkin eater they all cried in the forum.
Huffin and puffin, the skater stormed out and was involved in a Tram Crash.
The End~
Originally posted by kopatovA Tragedy I see, of Shakespearean proportions.
The skater on joining RHP went immediately to the General forum and announced he was the greatest playa EVAH~ Cheater, cheater, pumpkin eater they all cried in the forum.
Huffin and puffin, the skater stormed out and was involved in a Tram Crash.
The End~
your purpose only seems to make that cool million. you don't seemt to be interested in actually creating anything artistic. you need to develop your character(s) - more than one, to add interest. you need a protagonist, and some source for the tension to create an "arc" for your character. Where is she or he going? what is going to happen? (leaving it to the reader or viewer to wonder) You need to figure out if you are writing a mystery or a romance or a comedy or a tragedy or a farce or a . . . whatever . . . not just some seemingly clever idea.
by now, of course, you think that i missed your pallid attempt at humor and responded to your posit seriously. alas, i know you were only wasting time waiting for some opponent to post a move. me too.