...and who am I to disagree.
I've taken to poetry late in the night,
when all is quite and calm on this site.
RHP, TFC, CAW are serene,
both reds, the black, and even the green.
Maybe however I should get creative,
and use weird devices, gerund and dative,
and stop all of these absurd little couplets,
and....
...do something else.
Originally posted by royalchickenTaken to poetry late in the night,
...and who am I to disagree.
I've taken to poetry late in the night,
when all is quite and calm on this site.
RHP, TFC, CAW are serene,
both reds, the black, and even the green.
Maybe however I should get creative,
and use weird devices, gerund and dative,
and stop all of these absurd little couplets,
and....
...do something else.
the chicken keeps me amused.
the other forums howe'er right,
keep the cat quite confused.
I got nothing right now... too busy thinking chess....
So I dug this up, some original work....
Field Green Moon
The piece of mind I get
laying down in a field
my back wet
The Moon above
and grass below
the scent of love
The talk we have
goes 'round and 'round
Me looking up
you looking down
And what I see
is the pale green moon
You say it is blue
and I believe you
This would also fit in the thread named "first love never dies."
Originally posted by PhlabibitQuite nice Phlabibit,
I got nothing right now... too busy thinking chess....
So I dug this up, some original work....
[b]Field Green Moon
The piece of mind I get
laying down in a field
my back wet
The Moon above
and grass below
the scent of love
The talk we have
goes 'round and 'round
Me looking up
you looking down
And what I see
is the pal ...[text shortened]... and I believe you
This would also fit in the thread named "first love never dies."
[/b]
though whose it is you did not say.
I shall continue to wonder,
til my mind is black and blue,
and my world goes asunder.
Right now, it does not fit,
since it you have not claimed
this interesting writ.
Quite nice Phlabibit,
but is it yours, say yay or nay?
Originally posted by royalchickenI hate to disagree;
First Mr. Cat, though I shouldn't inhibt,
your questions...twas writ,
by our buddy Phlabibit.
And wow Mr. Phlabby, what a nice piece of verse,
really sublime,
how well you converse!
Lightly writ, as though by a dove,
this could indeed be,
in the thread on first love.
but, must point out one fact;
the poem said original;
but, did not say, "by me!"
I agree that it is good;
I'd even say supreme.
but til I have a yay or nay.
will stick with my last theme.
Originally posted by Cheshire CatYay, I must say!
Quite nice Phlabibit,
though whose it is you did not say.
I shall continue to wonder,
til my mind is black and blue,
and my world goes asunder.
Right now, it does not fit,
since it you have not claimed
this interesting writ.
Quite nice Phlabibit,
but is it yours, say yay or nay?
That poetry's mine.
It still paints me pictures,
and tickles my spine.
Reminds me of days,
Not much older than you.
When I believed in things...
I now know are not true.
Indeed feline,
you did divine,
by good use of semantics,
that Phlabby was ambiguous,
I'm quite proud of your antics.
It seems that from our puzzles,
you've learned extremely fast.
Against you in an argument,
I'm sure few'd even last.
However I've some news,
which just to mine ears came,
so get into my shoes,
and with Phlabby play a game.
He told me quite direct,
so no-one else would note it,
and his secrecy I won't respect.
He merely said "I wrote it" 😀
This written before Phlabsta' preempted me...😳
Originally posted by royalchickenI love the puzzles and the poems,
Indeed feline,
you did divine,
by good use of semantics,
that Phlabby was ambiguous,
I'm quite proud of your antics.
It seems that from our puzzles,
you've learned extremely fast.
Against you in an argument,
I'm sure few'd even last.
However I've some news,
which just to mine ears came,
so get into my shoes,
and with Phlabby play a gam ...[text shortened]... t respect.
He merely said "I wrote it" 😀
This written before Phlabsta' preempted me...😳
they are keeping me quite amused.
My grin is stretching from ear to ear.
with even that last piece of news.