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07 Oct 11

I really messed up.


[Event "RHP Blitz rated"]
[Site "www.timeforchess.com"]
[Date "2011.10.7"]
[Round "?"]
[White "hawcaller"]
[Black "HelmetCam68"]
[Result "1-0"]

1. d2-d4 d7-d5 2. h2-h3 e7-e6 3. Ng1-f3 g7-g6 4. Bc1-f4 Bf8-g7 5. e2-e3 Ng8-f6 6. Nb1-d2 Nf6-h5 7. Bf4-h2 O-O 8. Bf1-e2 Rf8-e8 9. Nf3-e5 Nh5-f6 10. O-O Nf6-d7 11. Nd2-f3 Nd7xe5 12. Nf3xe5 Bg7xe5 13. Bh2xe5 Nb8-c6 14. Be5-f4 e6-e5 15. d4xe5 Nc6xe5 16. Bf4-g3 Bc8-e6 17. Bg3xe5 Be6xh3 18. Be5-g3 Bh3xg2 19. Kg1xg2 c7-c5 20. Be2-f3 Qd8-g5 21. Bf3xd5 Ra8-d8 22. c2-c4 b7-b5 23. b2-b3 b5xc4 24. b3xc4 Re8-e5 25. Qd1-f3 Re5-f5 26. Qf3-e2 Rd8-e8 27. e3-e4 Rf5-f4 28. Rf1-h1 Rf4-g4 29. Qe2-f3 h7-h5 30. Qf3xf7 Kg8-h8 31. Qf7xe8 Kh8-h7 32. Qe8-f7 1-0

t

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H

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07 Oct 11

Originally posted by tharkesh
[pgn]
1. d2-d4 d7-d5 2. h2-h3 e7-e6 3. Ng1-f3 g7-g6 4. Bc1-f4 Bf8-g7 5. e2-e3 Ng8-f6 6. Nb1-d2 Nf6-h5 7. Bf4-h2 O-O 8. Bf1-e2 Rf8-e8 9. Nf3-e5 Nh5-f6 10. O-O Nf6-d7 11. Nd2-f3 Nd7xe5 12. Nf3xe5 Bg7xe5 13. Bh2xe5 Nb8-c6 14. Be5-f4 e6-e5 15. d4xe5 Nc6xe5 16. Bf4-g3 Bc8-e6 17. Bg3xe5 Be6xh3 18. Be5-g3 Bh3xg2 19. Kg1xg2 c7-c5 20. Be2-f3 Qd8-g5 21. Bf3xd5 Ra8-d ...[text shortened]... f4 28. Rf1-h1 Rf4-g4 29. Qe2-f3 h7-h5 30. Qf3xf7 Kg8-h8 31. Qf7xe8 Kh8-h7 32. Qe8-f7 1-0
[/pgn]
Wow. thanks what you did

t

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Originally posted by HelmetCam68
Wow. thanks what you did
just inserted something before and after your moves


your move 16... was just a blunder. your bishop cut off the knights protection by the rook.

before that a general hint: before moving the same knight a second time, try to develop the other pieces (according to some rule of thumb i just read today on greenpawns blog) first.

also, you have a nice fianchettoed bishop there, but the moves preceeding 12. Bg7xe5 make you loose your nice bishop too easily. he can be very powerful, try to be a bit more careful with it.

fourth, but not not least, have a look at greenpawns blogs. you can find many snips of chess wisdom there, use them at own peril... 😉

edit: i am not an expert!

H

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07 Oct 11

Originally posted by tharkesh
just inserted something before and after your moves


your move 16... was just a blunder. your bishop cut off the knights protection by the rook.

before that a general hint: before moving the same knight a second time, try to develop the other pieces (according to some rule of thumb i just read today on greenpawns blog) first.

also, you have a nic ...[text shortened]... find many snips of chess wisdom there, use them at own peril... 😉

edit: i am not an expert!
Rated near 1800 so I'll take all your advice. Yes I blundered at my 16
I felt pretty confident before move 27 or so. Should have done something more than pushing my side pawn.

I'll wander to blogs when I find tham Thanks for speaking up.

t
Theonecolin

London

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07 Oct 11

I'll wander to blogs when I find tham Thanks for speaking up.[/b]
Top of the page - right hand side - three links - Blitz / Blogs / Clubs

Hit the Blogs link and off you go 🙂

q

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08 Oct 11

Originally posted by tharkesh
[pgn]
1. d2-d4 d7-d5 2. h2-h3 e7-e6 3. Ng1-f3 g7-g6 4. Bc1-f4 Bf8-g7 5. e2-e3 Ng8-f6 6. Nb1-d2 Nf6-h5 7. Bf4-h2 O-O 8. Bf1-e2 Rf8-e8 9. Nf3-e5 Nh5-f6 10. O-O Nf6-d7 11. Nd2-f3 Nd7xe5 12. Nf3xe5 Bg7xe5 13. Bh2xe5 Nb8-c6 14. Be5-f4 e6-e5 15. d4xe5 Nc6xe5 16. Bf4-g3 Bc8-e6 17. Bg3xe5 Be6xh3 18. Be5-g3 Bh3xg2 19. Kg1xg2 c7-c5 20. Be2-f3 Qd8-g5 21. Bf3xd5 Ra8-d ...[text shortened]... f4 28. Rf1-h1 Rf4-g4 29. Qe2-f3 h7-h5 30. Qf3xf7 Kg8-h8 31. Qf7xe8 Kh8-h7 32. Qe8-f7 1-0
[/pgn]
Lets look right at the opening.
2h3!? is something of a waste of time so why did you play 2....e6?
Your centre wasn't under attack and it blocked bishop on c8 unnecessarily.
Attack his / prepare to attack his centre instead: 2..c51? instead and you are almost playing as white
In general, be more positive!..... a theme that seems to run through the game as you exchanged better placed pieces off rather too easily

H

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09 Oct 11

Originally posted by queenabber
Lets look right at the opening.
2h3!? is something of a waste of time so why did you play 2....e6?
Your centre wasn't under attack and it blocked bishop on c8 unnecessarily.
Attack his / prepare to attack his centre instead: 2..c51? instead and you are almost playing as white
In general, be more positive!..... a theme that seems to run through the game as you exchanged better placed pieces off rather too easily
Thank you, I'll study that up and think about it.

H

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More punishment! Turns out I AM the Fried Liver.