Can someone review/criticise these two games for me please? I am trying real hard to break 1600, so any advice offered is greatly appreciated 🙂
Thank you in advance...
[Event "Open invite"] [Site "http://www.redhotpawn.com"] [Date "2011.06.11"] [EndDate "2011.06.17"] [Round "?"] [White "FERQUIROS"] [Black "DiscoFingerz"] [WhiteRating "1478"] [BlackRating "1562"] [WhiteElo "1478"] [BlackElo "1562"] [Result "0-1"] [GameId "8486978"] 1. d4 Ng8f6 2. c4 e6 3. Nb1c3 Bf8b4 4. Bc1d2 Nb8c6 5. Ng1f3 O-O 6. e3 Bb4xc3 7. Bd2xc3 d5 8. c5 b6 9. b4 a5 10. b5 Nf6e4 11. Bc3b2 Nc6b4 12. c6 Qd8e8 13. Bb2a3 e5 14. dxe5 Bc8g4 15. Bf1e2 Ra8d8 16. h3 Bg4xf3 17. Be2xf3 Qe8xe5 18. O-O Rf8e8 19. Qd1c1 Re8e6 20. Bf3xe4 Qe5xe4 21. Ba3xb4 axb4 22. Qc1e1 Re6h6 23. f3 Qe4g6 24. h4 Rd8e8 25. Ra1d1 Re8e5 26. f4 Re5h5 27. f5 Qg6d6 28. e4 Rh5xh4 29. e5 Qd6c5 0-1
Also, this one...
[Event "Open invite"] [Site "http://www.redhotpawn.com"] [Date "2011.05.31"] [EndDate "2011.06.17"] [Round "?"] [White "WhiteHorses"] [Black "DiscoFingerz"] [WhiteRating "1529"] [BlackRating "1562"] [WhiteElo "1529"] [BlackElo "1562"] [Result "0-1"] [GameId "8459697"] 1. e4 c5 2. Bf1c4 d6 3. Nb1c3 e6 4. d4 cxd4 5. Qd1xd4 Nb8c6 6. Qd4d1 Ng8f6 7. Ng1f3 Bf8e7 8. O-O h6 9. Bc1f4 Nf6h5 10. Bf4e3 Nh5f6 11. Qd1d2 Bc8d7 12. a3 O-O 13. Ra1d1 Ra8c8 14. Bc4a2 Nf6g4 15. Be3f4 e5 16. Bf4g3 Bd7e6 17. Ba2d5 Ng4f6 18. b4 Be6g4 19. h3 Bg4h5 20. Bg3h2 Bh5xf3 21. gxf3 Nc6d4 22. Kg1g2 Nf6h5 23. Bd5xb7 Be7g5 24. Qd2d3 Nd4e6 25. Nc3e2 Rc8c7 26. Bb7d5 Qd8c8 27. c4 Bg5f4 28. Bh2g1 Bf4c1 29. Bg1h2 Bc1f4 30. Bh2g1 Ne6g5 0-1