My first published annotation

https://www.redhotpawn.com/annotation/annotationindex.php?playername=vandervelde

In a game I got checkmated...

Now I see language mistake in first comment.
I wrote "Gligoric was offer", and I meant he was victim.
"Offer" is Danish word for "victim"...

edit:: it was possible to edit this, however.

Black at move 13 is g6. You comment - mistake?
Why and what was the viable alternative?

Originally posted by @johnnybike
Black at move 13 is g6. You comment - mistake?
Why and what was the viable alternative?

I should have captured Bishop on e3 - i.e. 13....Bxe3 - since White doesn't have time for 14. Bxh7.
I commented this on the move before, I think, before or after 13. ...g6.