Patzerish game with annotations

[Event "Ladder"] [Site "http://www.redhotpawn.com"] [Date "2010.06.28"] [EndDate "2010.07.22"] [Round "?"] [White "rking00"] [Black "Shelrock57"] [WhiteRating "1688"] [BlackRating "1577"] [WhiteElo "1688"] [BlackElo "1577"] [Result "0-1"] [GameId "7554421"] 1. e4 c5 2. c3 e5 3. Bf1c4 Ng8f6 4. Qd1f3 Bf8e7 5. Ng1h3 h6 6. d3 O-O 7. Qf3g3 {trying to justify a silly opening with a silly attack} Nb8c6 8. Bc1xh6 Nf6h5 9. Qg3g6 d5 10. Qg6xh5 dxc4 11. Bh6e3 {has white really accomplished anything with all this? i'm not sure} Qd8xd3 {black is eager to snatch the loose pawn and harass the white king but this will cost at least one tempo} 12. Nb1d2 f5 {threatens to trap the bishop on e3 but white has an idea} 13. O-O-O f4 14. Be3xc5 {attacks the only defender of the g5 square} Be7xc5 {this leads to unnecessary trouble ..Bxh3 and black looks better} 15. Nh3g5 Bc8f5 {if Rfg8 there in a nice mate in 4} 16. Nd2f3 Bc5e3 17. fxe3 Qd3xe3 18. Rd1d2 Bf5xe4 19. Ng5xe4 Qe3xe4 20. Nf3g5 Qe4f5 21. Rh1f1 {?? throws away the win! i knew i had to kick black's queen off the light diagonal, but saw that after 21. g4 black can just take the pawn en passant. I should have seen that after 22.hxg3 black loses the queen to stop mate on h8!} 22. Rf8f6 22. g4 {too late: the black queen will come to the rescue} Qf5g6 23. Qh5xg6 {I was pretty demoralized after botching my attack and it shows.} Rf6xg6 24. h4 Ra8d8 25. Rd2g2 Rg6d6 26. h5 Nc6e7 27. Ng5e4 Rd6d3 28. Ne4c5 Rd3d5 29. Nc5e4 Rd5a5 30. b3 cxb3 {the a-pawn is pinned. White resigns.} 0-1

[FEN "r1b2rk1/pp4p1/2n5/2b1p1NQ/2p1Pp2/2Pq4/PP1N1PPP/2KR3R b - - 0 1"]
1... Rd8 2. Qh7+ Kf8 3. Qh8+ Ke7 4. Qxg7+ Kd6 5. Nxc4 {The c4 Knight is delivering the mate, d5 is covered with a pawn, e6 is covered with the g5 Knight, the Queen covers the 7th and the Rook is pinning the Queen. A teamwork Mate.}