Originally posted by Marinkatomb
Ok i'll have a crack, my comments shouldn't be taken as Gospel, i'm not strong enough for that but i can add a few ideas..
[pgn][Event "Open invite"]
[Site "http://www.redhotpawn.com"]
[Date "2012.10.07"]
[EndDate "2012.10.12"]
[Round "?"]
[White "vivify"]
[Black "Thorongil"]
[WhiteRating "1413"]
[BlackRating "1568"]
[WhiteElo "1413"]
[Bla ...[text shortened]... Rc1g1 Rc8c3 33. Qe2h5 Bh3g4 34. Qh5f7 Bg4f3 0-1
[/pgn]
Just a few thoughts. Hope they help
4. d5 I like this move: the most principled move. 4.Nf3 is possible but after 4...cd 5.Nd4 a very dangerous hyper-dragon is on the board; very difficult to play.
7 in positions after black plays a6, it is normally worth spending a move on a4 to prevent b5 from black. In positions with white pawns on d5&e4 against c5&d6 black is quite harmonious apart from one factor, he only has the d7 square for both his queenside minor pieces so white needs to concentrate on keeping his space advantage. (because of this black sometimes plays Na6 to Nc7 before playing a6, leaving d7 free for the bishop
I think after Nh3, it was better to play Be2 as opposed to Bd3, to keep an eye on the g4 square, with maybe a later f4 and Bf3
I like blacks h5, h4, h3 plan
White certainly can not allow hg, so measures must be taken to prevent this.
After hg in the game, white is awful/lost
hope this helps: IMPORTANT, REMEMBER ABOUT THE POSSIBILITY OF A4 TO PREVENT B5