Originally posted by greenpawn34Good? yes
Just need feedback on this the first real one.
Good, bad, yes, no, ideas... wrong direction, better class of game.
(you may need a better chess player for that)
I have left the comments off because they attract cranks with odd questions.
They can post odd questions in the forum and odd people can answer them.
(or should I leave comments on?).
Originally posted by DivGradCurlHe does write Chandler Cornered! To Greenpawn, everything you ever post is gold, no need for feedback!
I think everyone here likes your writing style, it's very original and entertaining! I wish you wrote a column in my newspaper or something... Anyway, your analysis of the game was fine, although personally I'd like to see you analyze some games of a slightly higher level once in a while. Also, although I liked your Introductory Thoughts and "Post of the ...[text shortened]... important concepts, favorite players, etc. Just my thoughts, I'll keep reading regardless!