What do you guys think

Event: Pre-Season Scholastic Tourny
Board: 2
White: [c guy1]
Rating: 1211
Black: Opponent
Rating: 1257
Date: 10/30/06

1. c4 c6
2. Nc3 Nf6
3. d4 d5
4. cxd5--I had just lost a game to a 1300 in which I didnt take the pawn (i push it instead 😕)
Nxd5
5. e4 Nxc3
6. bxc3 f6
7. Ba3 e5?
8. Bxf8 Rxf8
9. Qh5+ Ke7
10. dxe5 fxe5
11. Qxe5+ Be6
12. Bc4 Rf6
13. Rd1 Nd7
14. Qd6+ Ke8
15. Bxe6 Qb6
He said right about now that it was over...so he might as well swing for the fences
16. Bxd7+ Kf7
17. Qd4 Qxd4
18. cxd4 Rd8
19. Bg4 Rf4?
20. Bf3 g5
21. Nh3 Rf6
22. Nxg5 Kg6
23. e6 Rf4
24. Ne7 Rxf3
25. Nxd8---and thats essential it...from there i chased him for 13 moves around the board...checkmating the king on f4.

Opinions...where he could have done better earlier on...where I could have done better?

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The moves 23. e6 and 24 Ne7 are illegal, I assume you meant 23. e5 and 24. Ne6.

It looks like you played it more or less the right way.

[Event "Pre-Season Scholastic Tourny"]
[Board "2"]
[White "c guy1"]
[WhiteRating "1211"]
[Black "Opponent"]
[BlackRating "1257"]
[Result "1-0"]
[Date "2006.10.30"]

1. c4 c6
2. Nc3 Nf6
3. d4 d5
4. cxd5 {I had just lost a game to a 1300 in which I didn't take the pawn (I pushed it instead)}
4. ... Nxd5
5. e4 Nxc3
6. bxc3 f6
7. Ba3 e5?
8. Bxf8 Rxf8
9. Qh5+ Ke7
10. dxe5 fxe5
11. Qxe5+ Be6
12. Bc4 Rf6
13. Rd1 Nd7
14. Qd6+ Ke8
15. Bxe6 Qb6
{He said right about now that it was over...so he might as well swing for the fences}
16. Bxd7+ Kf7
17. Qd4 Qxd4
18. cxd4 Rd8
19. Bg4 Rf4?
20. Bf3 g5
21. Nh3 Rf6
22. Nxg5 Kg6
23. e5 Rf4
24. Ne6 Rxf3
25. Nxd8 {and white went on to win}
1-0

thanks...i didnt know how to do the form thingy