You seem to be an intelligent woman so I just decided to see how you play chess by looking at your last complete game. I was going through the game fairly quickly and saw that you had won a pawn on move 19. But then on move 21 you made a tactical error that I saw immediately. You are lucky your opponent did not see it.
I believe you could improve your chess a lot by studying a book on tactics or going to an internet site on chess tactics.
[Event "Banded Threesomes"]
[Site "http://www.redhotpawn.com"]
[Date "2014.12.05"]
[EndDate "2015.04.18"]
[Round "1"]
[White "D1013"]
[Black "Suzianne"]
[WhiteRating "1255"]
[BlackRating "1153"]
[WhiteElo "1255"]
[BlackElo "1153"]
[Result "0-1"]
[GameId "10934125"]
1. d4 d5 2. c4 e6 3. c5 Nb8c6 4. Ng1f3 Ng8f6 5. Bc1g5 Bf8e7 6. a3 O-O 7. e3 b6 8. b4 a5 9. Nb1c3 Nc6b8 10. cxb6 cxb6 11. b5 Bc8b7 12. Nf3e5 Nb8d7 13. Ne5xd7 Nf6xd7 14. Bg5xe7 Qd8xe7 15. Bf1d3 Nd7f6 16. h3 Ra8c8 17. Ra1c1 e5 18. O-O exd4 19. exd4 Qe7xa3 20. Qd1d2 Qa3b4 21. Rc1c2 Qb4xd4 22. Nc3e2 Qd4e5 23. Rc2xc8 Rf8xc8 24. f4 Qe5d6 25. Ne2d4 Nf6e4 26. Bd3xe4 dxe4 27. Rf1d1 Qd6f6 28. f5 Rc8d8 29. Qd2c3 h6 30. Qc3a1 e3 31. Nd4e2 Rd8xd1 32. Qa1xd1 Qf6xf5 33. Qd1e1 Qf5xb5 34. Kg1h2 Qb5g5 35. Ne2g3 Qg5f4 36. Kh2g1 a4 37. Ng3f1 Qf4e4 38. Nf1xe3 f5 39. Qe1d2 f4 40. Qd2d8 Kg8h7 41. Qd8d2 h5 42. Qd2c2 fxe3 0-1
I will demonstrate what I mean in the following diagram:
Just go through the moves by clicking on Next on the diagram.
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Originally posted by RJHindshey rj, could you give me some advice on how to improve my game?
You seem to be an intelligent woman so I just decided to see how you play chess by looking at your last complete game. I was going through the game fairly quickly and saw that you had won a pawn on move 19. But then on move 21 you made a tactical error that I saw immediately. You are lucky your opponent did not see it.
I believe you could improve your ...[text shortened]... the tactical error that allows your queen to be unprotected} 2. Bd3xh7+ Kg8xh7 3. Qd2xd4 [/pgn]
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Wrong forum.
Also, giving unsolicited advice on someone else's game should always be done
publicly so everyone can see...
Wait... No that's not right is it, Yeah, what you're supposed to do is the other thing...
Where you don't give unsolicited advice, or if you do, you do so privately to avoid
being an a*******
Well done for getting that right.
Originally posted by RJHindsYes, I missed that totally, as did he. Good eye.
You seem to be an intelligent woman so I just decided to see how you play chess by looking at your last complete game. I was going through the game fairly quickly and saw that you had won a pawn on move 19. But then on move 21 you made a tactical error that I saw immediately. You are lucky your opponent did not see it.
I believe you could improve your ...[text shortened]... the tactical error that allows your queen to be unprotected} 2. Bd3xh7+ Kg8xh7 3. Qd2xd4 [/pgn]
What do you expect from 1200 players? Neither of us are in line for the World Championship.
Originally posted by stellspalfieThis is your last completed game:
hey rj, could you give me some advice on how to improve my game?
[Event "Open invite"]
[Site "http://www.redhotpawn.com"]
[Date "2015.03.18"]
[EndDate "2015.04.01"]
[Round "?"]
[White "wiz444"]
[Black "stellspalfie"]
[WhiteRating "1352"]
[BlackRating "1361"]
[WhiteElo "1352"]
[BlackElo "1361"]
[Result "1-0"]
[GameId "11108145"]
1. e4 c5 2. Nb1c3 e6 3. Bf1c4 Ng8f6 4. e5 Nf6g8 5. Nc3b5 d5 6. exd6 Bf8xd6 7. Qd1g4 Bd6e5 8. Ng1f3 h5 9. Qg4e4 Be5f6 10. O-O a6 11. Nb5a3 Nb8c6 12. Qe4e3 b6 13. Qe3e4 Bc8b7 14. Bc4xe6 fxe6 15. Qe4xe6 Qd8e7 16. Qe6c4 O-O-O 17. Rf1e1 Nc6e5 18. Nf3xe5 Bf6xe5 19. Qc4b3 Rh8h6 20. Qb3h3 Kc8b8 21. Na3c4 Bb7c8 22. Qh3b3 Be5xh2 23. Kg1f1 Qe7f6 24. Re1e3 Kb8a7 25. Re3f3 Qf6e6 26. d3 Rd8e8 27. Rf3e3 Qe6c6 28. Re3xe8 Qc6xe8 29. Bc1xh6 Qe8g6 30. Bh6e3 b5 31. Be3xc5 Ka7a8 32. Nc4b6 Ka8b7 33. Qb3xg8 Bh2f4 34. Qg8xc8 Kb7a7 35. Nb6d7 Qg6b6 36. Qc8b8 Bf4xb8 37. Bc5xb6 Ka7b7 38. Nd7xb8 Kb7xb6 1-0
Advance moves by clicking next on the diagram and read my comments at selected moves.
Originally posted by googlefudgeOriginally posted by googlefudge
Wrong forum.
Also, giving unsolicited advice on someone else's game should always be done
publicly so everyone can see...
Wait... No that's not right is it, Yeah, what you're supposed to do is the other thing...
Where you don't give unsolicited advice, or if you do, you do so privately to avoid
being an a*******
Well done for getting that right. [hidden] [/sarcasm] [/hidden]
"Wrong forum."
For once we're in complete agreement, gf...
"Spirituality: Debate and general discussion of the supernatural, religion, and the life after." -Russ
Originally posted by RJHindsSeriously doubt you're that naïve: chess as we're all aware is a board game of strategic skill for two players [also played on online correspondence chess sites]; "spiritual": in rather than out of fellowship when believers fail to apply 1John 1:9.
Isn't playing chess spiritual to you?
Originally posted by Grampy BobbyOkay, all have sinned and come short of the glory of God, so I confess that I have sinned. Anyone else hear a spiritual calling?
Seriously doubt you're that naïve: chess as we're all aware is a board game of strategic skill for two players [also played on online correspondence chess sites]; "spiritual": in rather than out of fellowship when believers fail to apply 1John 1:9.
Originally posted by RJHindsOriginally posted by RJHinds
Okay, all have sinned and come short of the glory of God, so I confess that I have sinned. Anyone else hear a spiritual calling?
"Okay, all have sinned and come short of the glory of God, so I confess that I have sinned. Anyone else hear a spiritual calling?"
Romans 3:23 refers to justification by faith at the moment of salvation in contrast to 1John 1:9 which applies to believers only. "21 But now apart from the Law the righteousness of God has been manifested, being witnessed by the Law and the Prophets, 22 even the righteousness of God through faith in Jesus Christ for all those who believe; for there is no distinction; 23 for all have sinned and fall short of the glory of God, 24 being justified as a gift by His grace through the redemption which is in Christ Jesus; 25 whom God displayed publicly as a propitiation in His blood through faith." (Romans 3:21-25)