Man's Creation
"Meniscus bulging. Bulb expanding.
Tail squeezing, belly swelling.
Transparent, occasional silvery-blue.
A short life span. Gravity will see to it.
Cause and effect.
Its meaninglessness filled with profundity.
Simplicity, elemental and pure.
Inevitably, a separation into free-fall.
Hurtling towards the void.
Form demolished.
A disconnect reaching for nothing.
Oblivion, the endpoint of the everlasting creation, destruction cycle.
Energy conserved and transferred.
The system greatly affected, ripples agitated vibrationally.
No loved ones left behind, no genes passed on, no relationships.
No memories, no guilt.
No regrets, no angst.
No trace.
Just a fleeting conformation of nature’s laws.
What is creation?"
~ by some person who doesn't post here that thinks he's smarter than God.
@secondson saidExcluding the title, I see a beautiful piece of prose precisely 100 words in length.
Man's Creation
"Meniscus bulging. Bulb expanding.
Tail squeezing, belly swelling.
Transparent, occasional silvery-blue.
A short life span. Gravity will see to it.
Cause and effect.
Its meaninglessness filled with profundity.
Simplicity, elemental and pure.
Inevitably, a separation into free-fall.
Hurtling towards the void.
Form demolished.
A di ...[text shortened]... s.
What is creation?"
~ by some person who doesn't post here that thinks he's smarter than God.
Nice.
@secondson saidThe person who wrote the piece called it "God's Creation" not "Man's Creation" for a reason and certainly does not "think he's smarter than God". I'll pass your peculiar reaction to his writing on to him.
Man's Creation
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~ by some person who doesn't post here that thinks he's smarter than God.
-Removed-No you don't.
Ghost calls it a "beautiful piece of prose", and hakima said "hurrah", "a great poem", but because it conceals the truth of creation in terms dark with nihilism you offer no trace of rebuttal because of your lack of commitment to the truth.
But if a Christian posting in this forum posts a thread affirming the truth of God's Word you react with criticisms, disdain and contempt.
@secondson saidI also enjoy and appreciate the poem 'They Are All Gone into the World of Light' by Henry Vaughan. Should I admonish and dismiss it because of my atheism? - Here are a verse or two:
No you don't.
Ghost calls it a "beautiful piece of prose", and hakima said "hurrah", "a great poem", but because it conceals the truth of creation in terms dark with nihilism you offer no trace of rebuttal because of your lack of commitment to the truth.
But if a Christian posting in this forum posts a thread affirming the truth of God's Word you react with criticisms, disdain and contempt.
'O Father of eternal life, and all
Created glories under thee!
Resume thy spirit from this world of thrall
Into true liberty.
Either disperse these mists, which blot and fill
My perspective still as they pass,
Or else remove me hence unto that hill,
Where I shall need no glass.'
@secondson saidNever mind all that man, did he have a belly button?
Man's Creation
"Meniscus bulging. Bulb expanding.
Tail squeezing, belly swelling.
Transparent, occasional silvery-blue.
A short life span. Gravity will see to it.
Cause and effect.
Its meaninglessness filled with profundity.
Simplicity, elemental and pure.
Inevitably, a separation into free-fall.
Hurtling towards the void.
Form demolished.
A di ...[text shortened]... s.
What is creation?"
~ by some person who doesn't post here that thinks he's smarter than God.
@secondson saidI'll pass it on to him because, if I don't, he won't be aware of your comment that you think "he thinks he's smarter than God".
Why? Because you're the mediator between the spiritual and the profanum?