1. Territories Unknown
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    25 Dec '13 00:25
    The first Gospel
    first book of a New Testament
    first few words of a new-planned-for-from-before promise
    dedicated to remembering
    all of the connections
    the constant corrections to the path
    from when the passage first began
    passing, connecting, linking one to the next
    next to the next
    next to the other
    a drop of sweat here
    mixed with the toil of the other there
    here some blood, then some more
    a helix ladder braided
    by a chorus of echoed concerts
    until it culminated in a crescendo of breathless expectation
    of exultation
    this seed of the woman
    fingerprinted from Abraham to Ozias,
    from the exile from Babylon to Achim,
    dozens, bakers dozens of men from the womb
    not one able to receive the mantle

    until He appeared.
  2. Hmmm . . .
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    25 Dec '13 01:49
    Originally posted by FreakyKBH
    The first Gospel
    first book of a New Testament
    first few words of a new-planned-for-from-before promise
    dedicated to remembering
    all of the connections
    the constant corrections to the path
    from when the passage first began
    passing, connecting, linking one to the next
    next to the next
    next to the other
    a drop of sweat here
    mixed with the toil of ...[text shortened]... ns, bakers dozens of men from the womb
    not one able to receive the mantle

    until He appeared.
    Thumbs up for some artful lyricism! A happy Christmas to you, old friend.
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    25 Dec '13 02:151 edit
    Originally posted by FreakyKBH
    The first Gospel
    first book of a New Testament
    first few words of a new-planned-for-from-before promise
    dedicated to remembering
    all of the connections
    the constant corrections to the path
    from when the passage first began
    passing, connecting, linking one to the next
    next to the next
    next to the other
    a drop of sweat here
    mixed with the toil of ...[text shortened]... ns, bakers dozens of men from the womb
    not one able to receive the mantle

    until He appeared.
    Nice. Did you write that?
  4. Territories Unknown
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    25 Dec '13 20:03
    Originally posted by vistesd
    Thumbs up for some artful lyricism! A happy Christmas to you, old friend.
    Oil and wine, brother.
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    25 Dec '13 20:03
    Originally posted by whodey
    Nice. Did you write that?
    Thank you, yes.
  6. Joined
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    25 Dec '13 21:47
    Originally posted by FreakyKBH
    Thank you, yes.
    I could be your agent ya know.....
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    26 Dec '13 00:28
    Originally posted by whodey
    I could be your agent ya know.....
    Ten percent of nothin' still nothin'.
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