Haiku

Originally posted by adam warlock
Not a nice haiku.
Bad theme, wrong syllable count:
Just watch how we do.

I`m not Japanese
Unable to write haiku
Unable to count

Originally posted by Korch
I`m not Japanese
Unable to write haiku
Unable to count

Self-contradicting.
Nice intro, good finale.
Keep up the good work.

Originally posted by Sunburnt
Yes folks must not leap
before they look at the rules
haiku is simple.

And folks must not shoot.
Neither themselves nor others.
Life is too precious.

Originally posted by Nordlys
And folks must not shoot.
Neither themselves nor others.
Life is too precious.

But weapons are made
Because they`re effective
I`m not pacifist.

Haiku is microwave poetry
for the artistically impaired
get a job or do real poems

Originally posted by Seitse
Haiku is microwave poetry
for the artistically impaired
get a job or do real poems

I`m glad for you
You are very talanted
for posting nonsense

Originally posted by Korch
I`m glad for you
You are very talanted
for posting nonsense

A life is a goal worth
love of a woman as well
I recommend them both to you

Originally posted by Seitse
A life is a goal worth
love of a woman as well
I recommend them both to you

I have both of them
Which I cant say about you
So it was nice try

Originally posted by Korch
I have both of them
Which I cant say about you
So it was nice try

What people brag about
People lack in reality
Be somebody: Suicide.

Originally posted by Seitse
What people brag about
People lack in reality
Be somebody: Suicide.

It`s nice illusion
About your wisdom and mind
Wake up from your dream

Originally posted by Korch
It`s nice illusion
About your wisdom and mind
Wake up from your dream

Great memories from Riga
Ladies craving for foreigners
local men must lack something

😉

Originally posted by Seitse
Great memories from Riga
Ladies craving for foreigners
local men must lack something

😉

Poor Finnish people
Who lacks woman in Finland
Can get only sluts

😉

Originally posted by Korch
Poor Finnish people
Who lacks woman in Finland
Can get only sluts

😉

Brave man you are
honest enough to call
your own women sluts

😲

😵

Originally posted by Seitse
Brave man you are
honest enough to call
your own women sluts

😵

Sluts are these few ones
Milking some money from fools
Who have illusions

Originally posted by Korch
Sluts are these few ones
Milking some money from fools
Who have illusions

Very lousy comeback
Honesty triumphed already
Search Finnish flag under your bed

😵