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Originally posted by skywalker redsorry skywalker but this is not a limerick... nice try though
fairies fly all around you and me
too bad, you havent the eyes to see
square the circle and maybe you'll find
great things there, when you open your mind
as a wise man once said " Not all who wander are lost" you see
maybe you should try looking into that rhythm that ian was talking about...
Originally posted by darvlaysure it is, how is it not a limerick and as far as rhythm, it has just as much as ianpickering's attempt at a limerick, maybe you can enlighten us here, darv, why dont you come up with a limerick, and then ill tell you what i think of yours!
sorry skywalker but this is not a limerick... nice try though
maybe you should try looking into that rhythm that ian was talking about...
Originally posted by skywalker red"just as much" rhythm? you have to have a specific rhythm. try reading the others again, then read yours.
sure it is, how is it not a limerick and as far as rhythm, it has just as much as ianpickering's attempt at a limerick, maybe you can enlighten us here, darv, why dont you come up with a limerick, and then ill tell you what i think of yours!
i met this chess player named red
who could not stop wetting his bed
he tried rubber sheets
but his dinky still leaked
so he chopped off his friend at the head
ah, le mot juste...
Originally posted by darvlayhey, darvlay, i hope thats not your real name, is it? what the f@ck do es darvlay mean? and by the way darv, that so-called limerick you just posted, thats plaigerism, you stole that from someone else, that limerick dates back to about 1934, so, try again!!
"just as much" rhythm? you have to have a specific rhythm. try reading the others again, then read yours.
i met this chess player named red
who could not stop wetting his bed
he tried rubber sheets
but his dinky still leaked
so he chopped off his friend at the head
ah, le mot juste...
Originally posted by skywalker redthat limerick is all me, pal...
hey, darvlay, i hope thats not your real name, is it? what the f@ck do es darvlay mean? and by the way darv, that so-called limerick you just posted, thats plaigerism, you stole that from someone else, that limerick dates back to about 1934, so, try again!!
hey listen, i was trying to be nice and help you figure it out. there's no need to start being nasty and using the f-word. do you kiss your mother with that tongue?
Let me help you out Skywalker as you're obviously not clever enough to work it out yourself. The rhythm of a limerick is as follows
Dah dah dah dah dah dah dah dah
Dah dah dah dah dah dah dah dah
Dah dah dah dah dah
Dah dah dah dah dah
Dah dah dah dah dah dah dah dah
It's as simple as that. Now have another go!!
Guess I win then! Although it's not much of a victory against someone with such a low IQ I suppose. A bit like shooting fish in a barrel. He should be banned from the site for that. Showed himself up for all to see.
Bye bye Skywalker, adieu
Au revoir and good riddence to you
With your potty mouthed threats
(you know) you may have tourettes
And you sure have a tiny IQ
Originally posted by ianpickering🙂
Guess I win then! Although it's not much of a victory against someone with such a low IQ I suppose. A bit like shooting fish in a barrel. He should be banned from the site for that. Showed himself up for all to see.
Bye bye Skywalker, adieu
Au revoir and good riddence to you
With your potty mouthed threats
(you know) you may have tourettes
And you sure have a tiny IQ