Originally posted by kevcvs57 Well done for finishing first in a very strong competition.
Congrats and thanks to all the enrants for their endeavours which made for a very enjoyable read.
Usual thanks to yourself silverstriker for doing the heavy lifting again.
Thanks. I think my entry was a little morbid for some. 🙂
Was only truly happy with the line, '..amidst the fading aroma of lemon cheesecake and Arabica beans...'
Originally posted by Ghost of a Duke Thanks. I think my entry was a little morbid for some. 🙂
Was only truly happy with the line, '..amidst the fading aroma of lemon cheesecake and Arabica beans...'
I thought it was quite upbeat given the subject matter; I mostly liked the level of characterisation and sense of place; no easy thing given the word count restrictions. Again well done some of us can only dream of consigning mike169 and drewnogal into second place 🙂
Originally posted by kevcvs57 I thought it was quite upbeat given the subject matter; I mostly liked the level of characterisation and sense of place; no easy thing given the word count restrictions. Again well done some of us can only dream of consigning mike169 and drewnogal into second place 🙂
Spend half my life these days in coffee shops, so not too difficult to transport a reader there. 🙂
Perhaps i would spend less time there if i encountered a ghost.