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A Haiku About life

A Haiku About life

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I am Very Tired
Where did all my money go
My back is hurting

divegeester
watching in dismay

STARMERGEDDON

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Lol.

👍🏻

The Gravedigger
Jack Torrance

Overlook Hotel

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12 Apr 23

Foxy red in
Tooth and claw
Poor old mousey.

divegeester
watching in dismay

STARMERGEDDON

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@divegeester said
Lol.

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Three thumbs down
Positivity trampled under hoofs
What’s the point?

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13 Apr 23

Postman didn't knock
Glimpsed young wife's paps
She should feel shame

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@fmf said
Postman didn't knock
Glimpsed young wife's paps
She should feel shame
This one taps into an aspect of Japanese culture.

Kewpie
Felis Australis

Australia

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Fleeting syllables
Nature's essence captured tight
Beauty in brevity.

Composed by chatGPT.

F

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@fmf said
This one taps into an aspect of Japanese culture.
Unmarried at thirty
She is like stale Christmas cake
Sadly arranging flowers

Kewpie
Felis Australis

Australia

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A traditional haiku is a form of Japanese poetry that consists of three lines with a syllable pattern of 5-7-5. The rules for composing a haiku typically include:

Syllable Pattern: A haiku consists of three lines with the following syllable pattern: 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the second line, and 5 syllables in the third line. This adds up to a total of 17 syllables in a traditional haiku.

Haikus typically focus on the present moment, capturing a sensory experience or emotional response to a specific scene or event.

...contributed by ChatGPT

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@fmf said
This one taps into an aspect of Japanese culture.
See the river, see the shore
Encase them in concrete
Minister's amakudari secured

Kewpie
Felis Australis

Australia

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My homework not done
Video games are more fun
Mum's wrath now begun

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Haiku rules broken
in abundance oh my god
Teach them the right path

5 7 5 ya dummies.

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@kewpie said
My homework not done
Video games are more fun
Mum's wrath now begun
Video games glorifying war
Mothers a soft generation
Who can fight wars no more

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@thee said
Haiku rules broken
in abundance oh my god
Teach them the right path

5 7 5 ya dummies.
All my haikus scan correctly in northern Honshu lorry driver's Japanese.

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Suzianne oh my
Your picture I see, I try
Arrested again

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