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A Haiku About life

A Haiku About life

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I am Very Tired
Where did all my money go
My back is hurting



Foxy red in
Tooth and claw
Poor old mousey.



Postman didn't knock
Glimpsed young wife's paps
She should feel shame


@fmf said
Postman didn't knock
Glimpsed young wife's paps
She should feel shame
This one taps into an aspect of Japanese culture.


Fleeting syllables
Nature's essence captured tight
Beauty in brevity.

Composed by chatGPT.


@fmf said
This one taps into an aspect of Japanese culture.
Unmarried at thirty
She is like stale Christmas cake
Sadly arranging flowers

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A traditional haiku is a form of Japanese poetry that consists of three lines with a syllable pattern of 5-7-5. The rules for composing a haiku typically include:

Syllable Pattern: A haiku consists of three lines with the following syllable pattern: 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the second line, and 5 syllables in the third line. This adds up to a total of 17 syllables in a traditional haiku.

Haikus typically focus on the present moment, capturing a sensory experience or emotional response to a specific scene or event.

...contributed by ChatGPT


@fmf said
This one taps into an aspect of Japanese culture.
See the river, see the shore
Encase them in concrete
Minister's amakudari secured


My homework not done
Video games are more fun
Mum's wrath now begun


Haiku rules broken
in abundance oh my god
Teach them the right path

5 7 5 ya dummies.

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@kewpie said
My homework not done
Video games are more fun
Mum's wrath now begun
Video games glorifying war
Mothers a soft generation
Who can fight wars no more


@thee said
Haiku rules broken
in abundance oh my god
Teach them the right path

5 7 5 ya dummies.
All my haikus scan correctly in northern Honshu lorry driver's Japanese.


Suzianne oh my
Your picture I see, I try
Arrested again