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Digging through some old boxes today I came across a scrap peice of paper I've been carrying around for 10 yrs! (Yes, I'm a pack rat, I keep absolutely everything.) Anyway this little tattered peice of paper surrvived 10 yrs in a box only to serve as a gentle reminder of the tough times I've come through. It was given to me by an older lady with whom I'd poured my heart out to. The paper reads:

When things go wrong
As they usually will,
and your daily road
seems all uphill,

When funds are low
And debts are high,
When you try to smile
But can only cry

And you really feel
You'd like to quit......
Don't come to me
I don't give a 5hit!

Words of wisdom if ever I truly heard them. 😉

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I forgot to mention the lovely picture of Mickey Mouse giving me the finger. Truly heart warming

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Put it back in the box.

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Originally posted by elohiym chanan
Put it back in the box.
Why? I think the poem reflects the truth and I love it! 🙂

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Originally posted by mokko
Digging through some old boxes today I came across a scrap peice of paper I've been carrying around for 10 yrs! (Yes, I'm a pack rat, I keep absolutely everything.) Anyway this little tattered peice of paper surrvived 10 yrs in a box only to serve as a gentle reminder of the tough times I've come through. It was given to me by an older lady with whom I'd p ...[text shortened]... forgot to mention the lovely picture of Mickey Mouse giving me the finger. Truly heart warming
*sniffs* That poem...brings a tear to my eye!

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Originally posted by NelsonPatrick
Why? I think the poem reflects the truth and I love it! 🙂
Clean your mirror.

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Originally posted by elohiym chanan
Clean your mirror.
No! Never! It would mean that I would have to see myself... 😛

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Originally posted by elohiym chanan
Put it back in the box.
You should get back into your box and stay there for 10 years as you dont know nothing about a good tune, when one is put to you by one of our talented and cool friends here on this great site called rec hot poems 😀

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Originally posted by mokko
Digging through some old boxes today I came across a scrap peice of paper I've been carrying around for 10 yrs! (Yes, I'm a pack rat, I keep absolutely everything.) Anyway this little tattered peice of paper surrvived 10 yrs in a box only to serve as a gentle reminder of the tough times I've come through. It was given to me by an older lady with whom I'd p ...[text shortened]... forgot to mention the lovely picture of Mickey Mouse giving me the finger. Truly heart warming
I like your poem😀

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Originally posted by kellsy
You should get back into your box and stay there for 10 years as you dont know nothing about a good tune, when one is put to you by one of our talented and cool friends here on this great site called rec hot poems 😀
Tune? I didn't realize it was set to music... that changes everything!

Plonker.

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Originally posted by elohiym chanan
Tune? I didn't realize it was set to music... that changes everything!

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You knob, get back in your box

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Originally posted by elohiym chanan
Tune? I didn't realize it was set to music... that changes everything!

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No, I dont care if its set to music or not. I like it anyway...🙂

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Originally posted by NelsonPatrick
No, I dont care if its set to music or not. I like it anyway...🙂
And me, its great.🙂

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Originally posted by kellsy
And me, its great.🙂
Kellsy? Is there any chance that I know you?

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Originally posted by NelsonPatrick
Kellsy? Is there any chance that I know you?
We got good taste but we live in other parts of the world

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Originally posted by kellsy
We got good taste but we live in other parts of the world
Another great relationship ruined by logistics.

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