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Apologies to Rhymester

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kirksey957
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Working for the Sin
The ROW, all going for the win.

Playing from their villas
They all want to kill Attila(s).

And even though it's close,
The forums do get verbose.

And though Dave is all the rave,
His war cry is "We've got it made!"


Kirk

kyngj

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I'm glad you apologised in advance kirk!

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The King of Pawn

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Kirk,

I can write a worse ditty. Will wait for Joe to comment on the syntax
and flow of this composition. His new title should be 'The Critic'

There was a man from Lambok,
Who was always playing with his Rook

His Chess was a mess
It was always causing him some stress

So it he went back to his Chess Book

Si

kirksey957
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Thanks, now I feel better about mine. Kirk

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The King of Pawn

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Thats ok ... always looking out for my fellow RHP poets

kyngj

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I would quite like 'The Critic' it fits well, although I could never use it
in terms of chess play, everybody beats me too much for that!

Joe
The Critic

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Looks good to me!

Dave
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And Dave looked on with great wonder
Hoping in his games he would not blunder

And knowing the score
He screamed"We Need More!"

And proceeded to use his thunder.

Kinda corny but it rhymed

Dave
USA Captain
(And not a poet)

Thanks Kirk...I appreciate that

Rhymester
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Pseudo-poets on the loose
Call the rhyme police!
For all our sakes, these dodgy odes
Without delay should cease
Unless you want to make us cringe
With crimes against the verse
Just stick to prose and playing chess
Before things get much worse! ;-)


Rhymester
RHP (RedHotPoet)

kirksey957
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I agree. Kirk

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The King of Pawn

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Nice work there .... very good indeed. Puts us all to shame !

s

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If ROW is going to win,
then not because of Sin.
Great players in his team
deserve his highest esteem.

Who wins or looses in the end,
big deal, it's fun that we intend.


Sin , ROW captain,
the ultimate non-poet.

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