Autumn soles (poem)

One fateful day
Sometime in autumn
I saw the greatest shoes
So I bought 'em.

The soles on them were perfect
They could take me everywhere
They would never rip
They would never tear

I walked to the playground
And scared some kid
It was really funny
How he ran and hid

And after I walked to the pond
I'm not sure why
As the sun was setting
In the now dark sky

And after I walked in darkness
Which is not very wise
Because I could get mugged
By some shady guys

And after I reached my doorstep
And my soles still looked new
They would never let me down
This I surely knew

A lot of walking
Awaits
My
Autumn
Bought
Soles

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This is best enjoyed to some nice classical music. It's also a good idea if you print it out and put it up where you keep your shoes, as a lesson to them on how they should be.

Or you can just read it as it is, and start worshiping my awesome quality poem. Either way, I feel I've said pretty much all I want to say here. I bid you all farewell for now, and promise (annoying as it may be to some) that I'll be back sometime in the future. Till then, you should all just ponder the significance of spin off threads.

My shoes love it.

Very nice dear. 😉

Originally posted by Raven69
One fateful day
Sometime in autumn
I saw the greatest shoes
So I bought 'em.

The soles on them were perfect
They could take me everywhere
They would never rip
They would never tear

I walked to the playground
And scared some kid
It was really funny
How he ran and hid

And after I walked to the pond
I'm not sure why
As the sun was setting
I ...[text shortened]... in the future. Till then, you should all just ponder the significance of spin off threads.

Originally posted by shortcircuit
You tell the author of the original work that he has talent in one thread, and then you turn around and mock his work and him in another thread? That is somewhat hypocritical, wouldn't you say? 😞:'(

Originally posted by shortcircuit
You tell the author of the original work that he has talent in one thread, and then you turn around and mock his work and him in another thread? That is somewhat hypocritical, wouldn't you say? 😞:'(

Originally posted by Ice Cold
I thought it was clever, it also had a good beat you could dance to. I give it a 90. 🙂

Originally posted by Ice Cold
I thought it was clever, it also had a good beat you could dance to. I give it a 90. 🙂

Originally posted by shortcircuit
What? You've got two left feet and they are both clubbed. You can't dance!

Originally posted by Ice Cold
I used to be able to cut a mean rug. I installed carpeting. 😕

Here's a few short ones:

Shadows come, from the sky;
Grim is here;
A glow in his eye;
He points down a narrow path;
With anger and true wrath;
For me to wonder for the rest of time;
Even though I commit no crime;
I lift my head with pain on my shoulders;
As I walk to the land of black and horrible sounds of beholders;

The scythe slashes "Crash" down;
Cutting my soul into the ground;
Anger explodes through my veins;
And now with death no one has anything to gain;
Only me, with pain;
Sorrow rush through my body;
As evil comes near and haunts me;
Humanity looks at me;
As god; of deep beneath.

Originally posted by Dutch Defense
Here's a few short ones:

Shadows come, from the sky;
Grim is here;
A glow in his eye;
He points down a narrow path;
With anger and true wrath;
For me to wonder for the rest of time;
Even though I commit no crime;
I lift my head with pain on my shoulders;
As I walk to the land of black and horrible sounds of beholders;

The scythe ...[text shortened]... body;
As evil comes near and haunts me;
Humanity looks at me;
As god; of deep beneath.

Originally posted by shortcircuit
How many different threads are you going to post these in?

Originally posted by Dutch Defense
Here's a few short ones:

Shadows come, from the sky;
Grim is here;
A glow in his eye;
He points down a narrow path;
With anger and true wrath;
For me to wonder for the rest of time;
Even though I commit no crime;
I lift my head with pain on my shoulders;
As I walk to the land of black and horrible sounds of beholders;

The scythe ...[text shortened]... body;
As evil comes near and haunts me;
Humanity looks at me;
As god; of deep beneath.

Originally posted by Raven69
One fateful day
Sometime in autumn
I saw the greatest shoes
So I bought 'em.

The soles on them were perfect
They could take me everywhere
They would never rip
They would never tear

I walked to the playground
And scared some kid
It was really funny
How he ran and hid

And after I walked to the pond
I'm not sure why
As the sun was setting
I ...[text shortened]... in the future. Till then, you should all just ponder the significance of spin off threads.