11 Nov 09
Originally posted by trev33Why the awkward "...keep me from she" rather than the merely ok "...keep me from her"?
i can't decide.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J8Y_yTJKxsw
Why try to rhyme "roam" with "rose" when they don't rhyme?
A lovely sentiment, sure, but the lyricist could have done a better job.
Crap.
11 Nov 09
Originally posted by ParShooterbut roam and rose do rhyme.
Why the awkward "...keep me from she" rather than the merely ok "...keep me from her"?
Why try to rhyme "roam" with "rose" when they don't rhyme?
A lovely sentiment, sure, but the lyricist could have done a better job.
Crap.
BRILLIANT! (okay, maybe not brilliant, but very pleasing at the least)