Haiku

Originally posted by GinoJ
I like your avatar.

Originally posted by orangutan
well, most people are
negative re. avatar
So thank you Gino

Originally posted by Nordlys
You misunderstood!
"Four" in Norwegian - "fire".
It's pronounced "fee-rah".

Originally posted by orangutan
Trying to assist,
So you can get the gist too,
of writing Haiku.

No hate mail from me Oh no.
'tis just for fun here you see.

With time the child draws in
This whipping boy done wrong
Deprived of all his thoughts
The young man struggles on and on hes known
A vow unto his own
That never from this day
His will theyll take away

What Ive felt
What Ive known
Never shined through in what Ive shown
Never free
Never me
So I dub the unforgiven

They dedicate their lives
To running all of his
He tries to please them all
This bitter man he is
Throughout his life the same
Hes battled constantly
This fight he cannot win
A tired man they see no longer cares
The old man then prepares
To die regretfully
That old man here is me

You labeled me
Ill label you
So I dub the unforgiven

Originally posted by GinoJ
You labeled me
Ill label you
So I dub the unforgiven

Originally posted by GinoJ
With time the child draws in
This whipping boy done wrong
Deprived of all his thoughts
The young man struggles on and on hes known
A vow unto his own
That never from this day
His will theyll take away

Originally posted by Woodgie
I think you might have bust this now.

silly.

Originally posted by GinoJ
What I've felt, what I've known
Sick and tired, I stand alone
Could you be there, cause I'm the one that waits for you
Or are you unforgiven too?

Originally posted by GinoJ

Originally posted by Woodgie
You are going on my fire, son.

Originally posted by orangutan
Why are you spamming
This thread. Are you off your head?
Is that it - you're high?