Haiku

Originally posted by Yuga
Wonderful thread! Bravo,
for the premise of this thread,
greatly satisfies.

Originally posted by GinoJ
This is murder rap, I'll burn his back and push your sternum back
And have the doctor cover your head just like a turban wrap
A certain fact, you'll be prayin' on a Persian mat
Or hopin' Jesus or the police's bring the person back.

Originally posted by orangutan
You just don't get it
I'll say it again - Haiku:
Five, seven five, yes?

Originally posted by Yuga
Spam not, for word is
art. Utter eloquently,
mull over one's feelings.

Originally posted by GinoJ
I just now get it
you said it again Haiku
ten fourteen ten is it ok?
'cause they're proportional.

Originally posted by orangutan
You need just three lines
and a strict count to be made
or its not haiku

Originally posted by GinoJ
I just need three lines
and a strich count to be made
now I get it right?
(but can i write in parantheses?)

Originally posted by GinoJ
I just need three lines
and a strich count to be made
now I get it right?
(but can i write in parantheses?)

Originally posted by orangutan
Make it a tanka
Then you get some extra lines
seven and seven

which go at the end like this
and another like this too

Originally posted by reader1107
Parentheses are
ok if you put them down
below the haiku




(like this)

Limiting yourself
Is part of the haiku art.
Few words, much meaning.

Originally posted by GinoJ

Originally posted by orangutan
Hi reader, good eve.
How is the forum tonight
alive or dead, mm?

Originally posted by Nordlys
Limiting yourself
Is part of the haiku art.
Few words, much meaning.

Originally posted by Nordlys
More dead than alive.
What can we do about it?
Let's write some haikus.