Haiku

Originally posted by reader1107
It is not night yet
It is not yet 5 PM
but the forum lives

Wow - we're miles away
It's half past ten by my clock
how is the weather

(it's what we British are all
obsessed with don't you know)

Originally posted by Nordlys
That was good as a first line.
I'll finish for you.

I wonder if you are Finnish
or just tryin' to look like one when writing?
I just don't get it huh?

Originally posted by orangutan
Wow - we're miles away
It's half past ten by my clock
how is the weather

(it's what we British are all
obsessed with don't you know)

It's above zero
fahrenheit -- a real heat wave!
The sun shines as well!!!!

Originally posted by orangutan
Wow - we're miles away
It's half past ten by my clock
how is the weather

(it's what we British are all
obsessed with don't you know)

I would love to see this thread
to go up to -one thousand posts- so that
it will be a cool one.

Originally posted by Nordlys
Half past eleven!
I have only had breakfast.
Really need to eat.

so many time zones
I just can't keep up with them
(Sun always shining)

Originally posted by Nordlys
That was good as a first line.
I'll finish for you.

Nope still lost
as my teacher said daily
I am stupid

and he was stupid
i on the other hand am confused
would this be correct?

Originally posted by Yuga
Spam not, for word is
art. Utter eloquently,
mull over one's feelings.

Chastised I am and
ashamed. Called out for my spam
Half past twelve. To bed.

Originally posted by reader1107
It's above zero
fahrenheit -- a real heat wave!
The sun shines as well!!!!

'twas cold here as well.
Sun makes all the difference
to a winters day 🙂

Originally posted by klopdisselboom
Chastised I am and
ashamed. Called out for my spam
Half past twelve. To bed.

No - not your spam mate
It was another person.
Sleep tight in SA

Originally posted by Woodgie
Nope still lost
as my teacher said daily
I am stupid

and he was stupid
i on the other hand am confused
would this be correct?

Haiku is not cool
cuz it's very strict aint it
i hate it now

Originally posted by Woodgie
Nope still lost
as my teacher said daily
I am stupid

and he was stupid
i on the other hand am confused
would this be correct?

You are getting there.
Need to count the syllables
(syll-a-ble has three)

Originally posted by orangutan
You are getting there.
Need to count the syllables
(syll-a-ble has three)

wow you're really
good at this haiku thin'
you must be a genius orangutan

Originally posted by klopdisselboom
Chastised I am and
ashamed. Called out for my spam
Half past twelve. To bed.

perfect haiku, dude!!!
you did it! you counted the
syllables quite well!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by reader1107
perfect haiku, dude!!!
you did it! you counted the
syllables quite well!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i wish i was good
at this haiku thing man
because I aint good
(i aint postin' no more)
:'(

Originally posted by GinoJ
i wish i was good
at this haiku thing man
because I aint good
(i aint postin' no more)
:'(

That would be good news.
I wish I could believe you!
I don't think I can.