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Let's try again with person who is not so eager to finish 4 lines at once...

Add a line, and then another to the third etc.

Not allowed to add more than one line to the same limerick, so it'll take 5 posters to ceate 1.

Create your own first lines too!

First is for fun... 😀😀


There were two men, both names Pauls

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Originally posted by mikelom
Let's try again with person who is not so eager to finish 4 lines at once...

Add a line, and then another to the third etc.

Not allowed to add more than one line to the same limerick, so it'll take 5 posters to ceate 1.

Create your own first lines too!

First is for fun... 😀😀


There were two men, both names Pauls
whose wives were from Niagara Falls.

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Originally posted by Grampy Bobby
whose wives were from Niagra Falls.
They both were named Carol
And liked to wear barrels

(I know I broke your rules but it's much easier to get the couplet down in one shot)

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Originally posted by darvlay
They both were named Carol
And liked to wear barrels

(I know I broke your rules but it's much easier to get the couplet down in one shot)
I was going to join in, but the rules have been broken.

Enjoy your limerick making darv! I bet you could even do two or three lines at once if you really try.

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Originally posted by darvlay
They both were named Carol
And liked to wear barrels

(I know I broke your rules but it's much easier to get the couplet down in one shot)
There once was a user named Darv
Who ruined everything for everyone else.

The End!

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Originally posted by Grampy Bobby
whose wives were from Niagara Falls.
Note: Mike, realize it's one line at a time per customer. If the rule
had stated 'three lines' then lines 2, 3 and 4 would have been...


There were two men, both names Pauls,
whose wives were from Niagara Falls.

Pauls married twins in a double ceremony,
both signing pre-nups to avoid alimony...

🙂

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Originally posted by Grampy Bobby
whose wives were from Niagara Falls.
and they loved to tickle balls

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An epicure dining at Crewe,
Found a rather large mouse in his stew,
Said the waiter, "Don't shout,
And wave it about,
Or the rest will be wanting one too."

Good eh?

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RULES AMENDED

Add a line, and then another to the third etc.

Allowed to add more than one line to the same limerick but no more than 3.

CANNOT add line 5 yourself, line 5 is the one left open...

Create your own first lines too!

First is for fun...


There were two men, both names Pauls

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Originally posted by mikelom
RULES AMENDED

Add a line, and then another to the third etc.

Allowed to add more than one line to the same limerick but no more than 3.

CANNOT add line 5 yourself, line 5 is the one left open...

Create your own first lines too!

First is for fun...


There were two men, both names Pauls
Who were renown for their balls 😕

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Originally posted by Ice Cold
Who were renown for their balls 😕
There were two men, both Pauls
Who were renown for their balls
They thought they were flubber
But found they were rubber

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Originally posted by Ice Cold
Who were renown for their balls 😕
Yeah, nice rhythm Ice.... 😳

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Originally posted by Grampy Bobby
Note: Mike, realize it's one line at a time per customer. If the rule
had stated 'three lines' then lines 2, 3 and 4 would have been...


There were two men, both names Pauls,
whose wives were from Niagara Falls.

Pauls married twins in a double ceremony,
both signing pre-nups to avoid alimony...

🙂
two wimps Mike named Pauls and their dolls.


The End.

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Originally posted by Grampy Bobby
two wimps Mike named Pauls and their dolls.


The End.
I think that's the end of this thread..

No rhythm and no rhyme.... :'(

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Originally posted by mikelom
I think that's the end of this thread..

No rhythm and no rhyme.... :'(
Traditional limerick line end rhyming scheme... AA, BB, A

as well as the usual 'thump, thump' rhythm in place.

Why close it down, Mike? Unlike you to be faint of heart.

Let's go again and improve. Please give us the first line.