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i see: two verses, four lines each, last in each rhymes. None of the others rhymes.

Mr. Rabbit - what else do we do ?

how come some get a better rhythm, what is it ?

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The official rules are here:

http://www.daen.dk/archives/000146.html

My favorite, author unknown, is:

'Jiggeroff Popperoff
Vyacheslav Molotov
Wooed a young coed at
Leningrad U.

With blini and vodka and
Trinitrotoluene,
They discussed Marx over
Cocktails for two.'

Or maybe:

'Higgledy-Piggledy
Professor Schrodinger,
"The Final Solution?
Kitties? Oi veh!"

Very strange your form of
Quantumfelinacide
Was overlooked by the
SPCA.'

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Nf3 Na6
d3 c5
c4 d6
h3 Qa5+

Nc3 Nb4
b3 g6
g3 a6
Ne4 Nc2++


(how am i going here - i haven't found a name yet, and the rhyme is more visual than masculine - whatever that means)

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c3 Na6
f3
d6
Qa4+

c6 Na3
e6
g4
Qh4++

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Finger De Lickety
Roy Albert Chicken
Intergalactical
Messer of minds

He is Mathmatical
Double Didactical
Stays up late playing chess
Eats Coffee grinds.


Here is the forumula….. I think I hit it.

A dactyl, as you may know, is a poetic foot of the form >-- (ON-off-off). For example, interstate, realize, microphone, cereal, limerick, etc. etc. A double dactyl, naturally enough, is two dactyls in a row.
A double dactyl is also a poem... Quite like a limerick, it has a rigid (if peculiar) structure. Two stanzas, each comprising three lines of dactylic dimeter followed by a line with a dactyl and a single accent. The two stanzas have to rhyme on their last line. The first line of the first stanza is repetitive nonsense. The second line of the first stanza is somebody's name -- strictly speaking, a proper noun. Note that this name must itself be double-dactylic. E.g. Gloria Vanderbilt, Jesus of Nazareth, Gilbert and Sullivan, Archangel Gabriel. In the second stanza, one entire line must be a double-dactylic word. E.g. biopsychology, geopolitical, gastrointestinal, abecedarian, etc. etc.



P-

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Zippity zappity
Master Phlabibit
wrote some fine verses
with dactylic feet.

The subject: a chicken
given to pondering
hypercompulsively
the NP-complete.

Well done, Phlabby 😀!