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Need readers to critique my new novel.
Will you oblige?

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Give me a brief abstract and if it's my cup of tea I'll go for it.

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Originally posted by Bob Zimmerman
Need readers to critique my new novel.
Will you oblige?
Of course. Main thing, Bob Z, is simply to let us enjoy it... that's worth more than any critique. How about the title and first chapter or two.




Note: There are several highly qualified members to assist you... Coquette, GreatBigStees, Fleabitten, HandyAndy, Nordlys and others.

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Originally posted by Grampy Bobby
Of course. Main thing, Bob Z, is simply to let us enjoy it... that's worth more than any critque. How about the title and first chapter or two.




Note: There are several highly qualified members to assist you... Coquette, GreatBigStees, Fleabitten, HandyAndy, Nordlys and others.
'critique'

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Originally posted by Phlabibit
'critique'

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Thanks. Some days vision impairment coupled with right index only keyboard dexterity can manifest itself in a variety of ways. It's a bitch.



😀

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Love to have a read, Bob.

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Originally posted by Bob Zimmerman
Need readers to critique my new novel.
Will you oblige?
Certainly.

There is too much space between the covers of this book.

A-thank you, I'll be here all night!! 😵
(...tap-dances weirdly off stage...)

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Originally posted by Grampy Bobby
Thanks. Some days vision impairment coupled with right index only keyboard dexterity can manifest itself in a variety of ways. It's a bitch.



😀
try using fists like I do.

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Originally posted by Grampy Bobby
Of course. Main thing, Bob Z, is simply to let us enjoy it... that's worth more than any critique. How about the title and first chapter or two.




Note: There are several highly qualified members to assist you... Coquette, GreatBigStees, Fleabitten, HandyAndy, Nordlys and others.
Inadvertently omitted (the well read, astute) MontyMoose; (missing in action) Mikelom, Kentron, Shavixmir; and (my almost friend) Hand of Hecate.



Correction: Title, first paragraph and last paragraph of your concluding chapter. Let her rip. Our collective bias is to be entertained and to praise.

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Originally posted by wormwood
try using fists like I do.
Usually use Swedish fists to make otherwise feeble chess moves and USA elbows for any threads or posts. Will try using fists for both. 😀

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Originally posted by Bob Zimmerman
Need readers to critique my new novel.
Will you oblige?
What's it about?

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Originally posted by Bob Zimmerman
Need readers to critique my new novel.
Will you oblige?
yer last one was written on TP, and I found it immensley helpful😏

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Bring it on.

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How about posting the synopsis to see who would like to read it in full?

And I'd love to read it btw 🙂

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Originally posted by catnap642
How about posting the synopsis to see who would like to read it in full?

And I'd love to read it btw 🙂
What I want to know is, when is it being made into a film?