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I don't care what you think
Yet you make me drink
I'm hanging on the brink
Beginning to sink

Contemplating dice
Not afraid of mice
Trying to be nice
You've trapped me in a vice
Toying me with lice

Think i'm going insane
Write away my pain
Hit me with your cane
There's much to gain
Don't give me to Jane
Lets try another lane


Oh what a horrible muck,
run now and don't forget to duck,
this stuff won't earn you a buck,
after reading this many will upchuck,
I must admit you have pluck,
to try and sell this hockey puck,
but brother you'll have no luck,
because this poem doth surely suck.

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Originally posted by trev33
I don't care what you think
Yet you make me drink
I'm hanging on the brink
Beginning to sink

Contemplating dice
Not afraid of mice
Trying to be nice
You've trapped me in a vice
Toying me with lice

Think i'm going insane
Write away my pain
Hit me with your cane
There's much to gain
Don't give me to Jane
Lets try another lane
I think this would be great Punk Rock lyrics Trevie. 🙂

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Originally posted by ChessPraxis
I think this would be great Punk Rock lyrics Trevie. 🙂
I thought C(rap).

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Originally posted by Great Big Stees
I thought...
Did you? Did you REALLY?[/skepticlook]

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Originally posted by Phlabibit
Did you? Did you REALLY?[/skepticlook]
Well I think so.😳

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Originally posted by Great Big Stees
Well I think so.😳
What would the Punk Rock people think?

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Originally posted by Very Rusty
What would the Punk Rock people think?
Ya right. They don't.

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Originally posted by Very Rusty
What would the Punk Rock people think?

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I only write it, its meaning is for my future philologist to decide.


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