Originally posted by kevcvs57There is a laundry list, but the most glaring in my mind is WHILE I was reading I thought, "This looks like a bunch of cut and paste info combined to make a story".
Probably, if I knew what that meant. but I was thinking more, 'it sucked because the frogs were the wrong colour'.
Next, at the end... there is all the references to the web sites where the info was gleaned from. It read like all the boring chapters of Moby-Dick with no adventure to keep you in the game. Almost as long too.
Boring, pretentious, just writing for the sake of pounding a keyboard and moving a mouse around.
Cliff notes are quick references to books for study aids.
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Originally posted by PhlabibitNow that is what I call a critique, cheers for the 'cliff notes' definition.
There is a laundry list, but the most glaring in my mind is WHILE I was reading I thought, "This looks like a bunch of cut and paste info combined to make a story".
Next, at the end... there is all the references to the web sites where the info was gleaned from. It read like all the boring chapters of Moby-Dick with no adventure to keep you in the gam ...[text shortened]... and moving a mouse around.
Cliff notes are quick references to books for study aids.
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No thoughts on the pretty frogs though😳
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Originally posted by PhlabibitColes Notes?
There is a laundry list, but the most glaring in my mind is WHILE I was reading I thought, "This looks like a bunch of cut and paste info combined to make a story".
Next, at the end... there is all the references to the web sites where the info was gleaned from. It read like all the boring chapters of Moby-Dick with no adventure to keep you in the gam ...[text shortened]... and moving a mouse around.
Cliff notes are quick references to books for study aids.
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