Originally posted by GatecrasherThis version lacks punch. That's why I swiftly rejected it.
Not really sure what your thing is, though I've ruled out wit.
Not to worry, though. Your narrow mind has earned itself more than one pat on the back.*
*This is called a mixed metaphor. And I happen to like them.
Originally posted by BowmannThis version lacks punch, that's why it was swiftly rejected.
This version lacks punch. That's why I swiftly rejected it.
Not to worry, though. Your narrow mind has earned itself more than one pat on the back.*
*This is called a mixed metaphor. And I happen to like them.
Not to worry; your narrow mind has earned more than one pat on the back.
This is called a mixed metaphor. I like mixed metaphors.