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It took me until this morning to figure out what you meant, since I don't have a flickr account. I thought "Morris" was a Morris the Cat reference.

I should clarify that I am not Morris who posted the two Emperor Moth videos on YouTube.

Mistaken for someone else yet again,
CS

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@caesar-salad said

I should clarify that I am not Morris who posted the two Emperor Moth videos on YouTube.

Mistaken for someone else yet again,
CS
Not wishing to mistake you for a third time, but aren't you that chap from the Halifax adverts? (Howard I believe).


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@ghost-of-a-duke said
Not wishing to mistake you for a third time, but aren't you that chap from the Halifax adverts? (Howard I believe).


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n-Y6V5sqf0U
If I am, it's news to me!

(thanks for the youtube link -- I had not seen any of those ads)


@caesar-salad said
If I am, it's news to me!

(thanks for the youtube link -- I had not seen any of those ads)
Howard actually went on to be a bit of a celebrity, on the back of those adverts.


Repetition:

topic: ghost/supernatural/scary

keywords to be included: superstition - twilight - phantom

max. number of contributions per author: 2

amount of words: up to800

Last date for entering the contest: 7th of July 23:59 RHP-Time.

Post to Ponderable_Dickens@yahoo.com


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@ghost-of-a-duke said
Although there is no minimum word count, I think it unlikely that a really (really) short story would win the competition. (Possible, but unlikely). The main reason for this is that voters will usually recognize the time and effort an author has put into their entry. This probably wouldn't be the case if it was a poetry competition. (I actally prefer short poems if they are well written).
At twilight the old house was musty,
The caretaker looked sort of crusty
Superstition or was he a real phantom
And believe me it was no bantam
I cried out dear God its old Rusty.


@the-gravedigger said
At twilight the old house was musty,
The caretaker looked sort of crusty
Superstition or was he a real phantom
And believe me it was no bantam
I cried out dear God its old Rusty.
Reminds me of a hangout in Toronto's "Yorkville" district, in the 60s...Poet's Corner.


@the-gravedigger said
At twilight the old house was musty,
The caretaker looked sort of crusty
Superstition or was he a real phantom
And believe me it was no bantam
I cried out dear God its old Rusty.
LOL....Not bad gravedigger!!! 😉

-VR

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Yes, I suppose I do to some extent. I'll see if I can come up with some more red herrings later on. 😉

I saw that Morris has done some nice paintings, which I would not have seen without the flickr reference, so thank you for that. I drew and painted from teens through 20s, but haven't really done anything in that area for decades, despite having the supplies.

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Superstitions are slowly dying
But the phantoms are still bye-bye-ing
So sorry to see that, though
Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow

The weather outside is frightful
But the twilight is so delightful
The lanterns are turned down low
Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow

When we finally say good-night
I'll become part of the storm
Waiting for absence of light
Just to show my ghastly form

Well my embers are slowly dying
And it's well past the time for crying
The phantoms know where to go
Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow


@caesar-salad said
Superstitions are slowly dying
But the phantoms are still bye-bye-ing
I'm sorry to see that, though
Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow

The weather outside is frightful
But the twilight is so delightful
The lanterns are turned down low
Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow

Well my embers are slowly dying
And it's past the time for crying
The phantoms know where to go
Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow
Sounds quite familiar....You borrow that from someone? 😉

-VR

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@very-rusty said
Sounds quite familiar....You borrow that from someone? 😉

-VR
Indeed! Credit due to Sammy Cahn and Jule Styne for the original:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Let_It_Snow!_Let_It_Snow!_Let_It_Snow!


@caesar-salad said
Indeed! Credit due to Sammy Cahn and Jule Styne for the original:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Let_It_Snow!_Let_It_Snow!_Let_It_Snow!
LOL...Of course it was a rhetorical question. 😉

-VR

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@very-rusty said
LOL...Of course it was a rhetorical question. 😉

-VR
I added the chorus (third verse) and tuned it up a little. Of course now this makes my "real" entries look stodgy and lackluster by comparison. Oh well.

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