June Sentence Comp

Finish the sentence in 50 words or less (not including the words I give you).

... and that is why I'll never visit Canada again.

You may either PM me your entry or post it here. Deadline is June 17, 2010. Non-sentences will be disqualified.
Only one sentence per person please, if you send/post more than one I'll take the first one unless otherwise specified by you.

The winner will have a chance to win a subscription!

May competition: Thread 129858

Winner: It was a dark and stormy night; the rain fell in torrents — except at occasional intervals, when it was checked by a violent gust of wind which swept up the streets, rattling along the housetops, and fiercely agitating the scanty flame of the lamps that struggled against the darkness. - clandarkfire

again?

Originally posted by trev33
again?

It's like herpes, it always comes back.

Originally posted by Raven69
It's like herpes, it always comes back.

HerPeas? I didn't know she had a garden...

Originally posted by Raven69
May competition: Thread 129858

Winner: It was a dark and stormy night; the rain fell in torrents — except at occasional intervals, when it was checked by a violent gust of wind which swept up the streets, rattling along the housetops, and fiercely agitating the scanty flame of the lamps that struggled against the darkness. - clandarkfire

Nice. Congrats, clandarkfire.

Originally posted by Raven69
Finish the sentence in [b]50 words or less (not including the words I give you).

... and that is why I'll never visit Canada again.

You may either PM me your entry or post it here. Deadline is June 17, 2010. Non-sentences will be disqualified.
Only one sentence per person please, if you send/post more than one I'll take the ...[text shortened]... one unless otherwise specified by you.

The winner will have a chance to win a subscription![/b]

Can I change the ending to "...and thats while I'll never visit Canada."?

Originally posted by karoly aczel
Can I change the ending to "...and thats while I'll never visit Canada."?

I should think not. Besides, does that even make sense?

Originally posted by Gatecrasher
I should think not. Besides, does that even make sense?

Yeah, sure it makes sense.
I hate the cold and thats why I'll never visit Canada. 😛

Originally posted by Raven69
Finish the sentence in [b]50 words or less (not including the words I give you).

... and that is why I'll never visit Canada again.

[/b]

The sentence has already been finished, it just needs a beginning.

Originally posted by Gatecrasher
I should think not. Besides, does that even make sense?

No.

Originally posted by karoly aczel
Yeah, sure it makes sense.
I hate the cold and thats why I'll never visit Canada. 😛

But you are using 'why' here...? 😵 'While' makes no sense.

Originally posted by Raven69
But you are using 'why' here...? 😵 'While' makes no sense.

ok.
Just count me out then cause I,ve never been to Canada

clearly I'm not cut out to write. Other than "poetry". 🙁
I'll still enjoy reading the winners,(or anyone elses), entries. Cheers🙂

Originally posted by karoly aczel
ok.
Just count me out then cause I,ve never been to Canada

Nor have I, but you are allowed to use your imagination. Fictional works are encouraged.