Here is my first competitive over the board game for about 6 years. It was a first round club championship game. Our championship is split into two groups, one of the three strongest players who play each other twice, and one of the 5 weaker players, who play each other once, drawing colours. The winners of each section will play each other in the Club Championship final. First up I had probably the strongest player in our section, graded 111ECF, and unfortunately I drew black. Here is the game, I've made some comments and I'm going to stick it through my copy of RJHindenbritz13 later, but I'd appreciate some gentle feedback from you lads and a little, probably less gentle from one aristocratic lass 😛.
Time control was 35 moves in 75 minutes, then +15 minutes sudden death.
You should probably invert the board so my comments make more sense.
There will be lots of edits as I add comments, checking that they dont mess up the PGN. I've added my comments up to move 22, I'll add the rest after watching some telly, this PGN thing is such a pain in the arse it's giving me a headache!
[Event "Holywell Club Championship"] [Site "The Rock Inn, Lloc"] [Date "10/9/12"] [White "Barrie Hird (1538)"] [Black "Dewi Jones(UG)"] [Result "0-1"] [Position White "Ke1,Qd1,Ra1,Rh1,Bc1,Bf1,Nb1,Ng1,a2,b2,c2,d2,e2,f2,g2,h2"] [Position Black "Ke8,Qd8,Ra8,Rh8,Bc8,Bf8,Nb8,Ng8,a7,b7,c7,d7,e7,f7,g7,h7"] [Topic ""] 1. Nf3 Nf6 {drawing black I thought I wouldn't get the chance to play my prepared Kings Indian Attack, so this was a bonus, KID instead} 2. g3 g6 3. Bg2 Bg7 4. O-O O-O {I'm happy with this position, I may be one tempo down, but I've been allowed to set up the system I favoured, and my opponent hasn't had a chance to build up pressure the e4 square to trouble my f square knight. One of the things that bothers me when I'm playing Kings Indian Attack}5. d3 d5 {This felt like a minor victory, I appear to have had one more move than white, By my reckoning we're now dead even and white has lost his first move advantage.} 6. Nbd2 Nc6 {as we are symmetrical, and there is no pressure on my f knight, I don't feel the need to have my b Knight on d2, also it paves the way for e5 and a strong pawn centre} 7. Re1 e5 8. e4 d4 {This was played to intentionally block the centre, I felt it had a cramping effect on my opponent and as we are both playing Kings Indian and both had our kings safely castled, I didn't feel a blocked centre was a disadvantage to me. I have been told by a strong RHP player that it is a bad move for black to block the centre here, the only other move I can see would be b6, allowing me to fiancetto my dark bishop - would that be better?} 9. a3 {I considered this a wasted move by my opponent, and marked my score sheet to ask him about it at the end of the game, he did it to prevent my knight going to b4, but it wasn't going there anytime soon anyway. If he's going to move the pawn, I believe it should go to a4. This clears the way for 10. Nc4 attacking my backward pawn and prevents me from responding with 10. ...b5} Bg4 {pinning the knight against the queen, and hopefully drawing the h pawn forward} 10. h3 {good good} Bd7 {and now I move my bishop to the square where I really wanted it, I could have done it the move earlier, but I consider it better having drawn the pawn forward - we'd both used 15 minutes of our time at this point} 11. Nc4 {attacking the e pawn and freeing the dark bishop for a knight pin} Re8 {probably not the best move, it gives my opponent another chance to play 12. a4.} 12. b4 {which he still doesnt do} b5 {so at last, I take away the option} 13. Ncd2 {and he's forced to retreat} Qc8 {I play Kings Indian attack as white, so I thought what moves do I hate my opponents making against me, and the queen and bishop combining to pressure h3 is one of my pet hates} 14. Kh2 {I can't see any other way he can defend the pawn} a6 {I couldn't see any move here for black other that 14. ...a5, but I chickened out and played a6 instead so as not to open things up. 14. ...a5, 15. bxa5 to prevent 15... axb, 16. axb dropping the rook ...Rxa5 and I think black stands better} 15. Ng1 Nd8 { Still should have played a5, still chickening out, so I don't know what to do, I decide my pieces would be better placed on the kingside} 16. Nf1 Ne6 17. Bd2 {with the plan I had on move 13 of putting pressure on my h6 square} c5 18. Qc1 {How I hate my h6 square} c4 {Nothing I can do about the h6 square, so I'll give him something to think about, and hopefully get the queens off the board by opening the c file} 19. Bh6 cxd3 20. Bxg7 Kxg7 {white has used 33 minutes, Black has used 41} 21. cxd3 Qxc1 22. Raxc1 Rac8 {I feel that my endgame play is stronger than my rating and my middle game play weaker, so let's get the rooks off too} 23. Nd2 Rxc1 24. Rxc1 Rc8 25. Rxc8 Bxc8 26. Nb3 Nd7 27. h4 Nb6 28. Bh3 Na4 29. Ne2 Nc3 30. Bg4 Nb1 31. Bxe6 fxe6 32. f4 exf4 33. gxf4 Nxa3 34. Nexd4 Nb1 35. Ne2 Kh6 36. e5 Kh5 37. Kh3 {next comes a terrible blunder, but the question is was the position already lost or would 37. ...Kh6 have given me a chance to draw} h6 {??} 38. Ng3 0-1