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Most of my comments are for black (because I dont play the white side of the Sicilian) and most of them are simply a matter of taste anyway
9. .. Bd7
I've never liked this move, i usually find i can't build enough momentum as black. I prefer
9. .. Nd5
10. Bb3 a5
12. .. Nc4
I prefer h5
Nb3 is more common but i think i like your continuation better. AFAIK you are both still in the book .. or at least you should be ..
20. .. Bxf4
I think after Qa5 black is looking at least as good as white. The reason is that now Blacks Queen can swing into the defense of his kingside while still maintaining pressure on the white king. The game continuation shows how dangerous the white attack is at this point.
23. .. Kg7
I'm pretty sure that this was the breaking point.
I think maybe e5 or Qa5 may have been better .. bringing the Queen to the party better late than never?