"...but hey i can learn."
The old way to note up a game was is to first look at who won.
Then praise the winners moves and slag off the losers moves.
So for this reason I have selected a game of yours for you to note up....a draw.
This game produced this incredible position. White to play.
Black has managed in 12 moves to place 4 pieces on unprotected squares.
(ithat is actually quite hard to do.....It's a gift.) and...
...after 13.Qd5 The Queen is attacking every one of them.
(It's a good job she can only have move at time.)
So Hempster. Note up this game.
You are only allowed 5 annotations (comments or pieces of short, and I mean
short, analysis.) so choose your critical moments well.
An introduction to the game, a quick summary, warning the reader what they
are about to see does most of the notes for you. (Fred Reinfeld was a master
at this. You rarely see a game he noted up without an intro.)