haiku clan

Originally posted by lemondrop
what is a true rating?
it goes up and it goes down
it belongs to you
and if you own it
it is true

There you said it
Now remember it
About others don't mention it

crashing the party
the king stuffing his fat face
the pawn was poisoned

this forum doesn't always have to be a big hate fest
have some fun
post some haiku

Originally posted by lemondrop
this forum doesn't always have to be a big hate fest
have some fun
post some haiku

I haik u Lemon !!!

😵😵

Originally posted by radioactive69
I haik u Lemon !!!

😵😵

it's a start

Originally posted by lemondrop
it's a start

So how about explaining what it is. We all might join in on the (fun?) if we have some idea what it means. It sounds like something between a sneeze and a kiwi haka

you can google it for a better explanation
but it is basically a seventeen syllable expression in three lines
5-7-5
may vary but this is the basic structure
it is usually written in the present tense
and most likely a reference to nature
seasons
animals
flowers
etc.

Originally posted by lemondrop
you can google it for a better explanation
but it is basically a seventeen syllable expression in three lines
5-7-5
may vary but this is the basic structure
it is usually written in the present tense
and most likely a reference to nature
seasons
animals
flowers
etc.

Sounds a bit gay...........but hey......I'll give it a go.

Stay posted !!!!

Originally posted by radioactive69
Sounds a bit gay...........but hey......I'll give it a go.

Stay posted !!!!

I can't wait
you might create a new art form
aussie haiku

better things to do
climbing the corrupt ladder
getting a nose bleed

can you haiku?
I have a feeling that there are lots of good haiku composers out there
wish you would post
let's have some fun for a change

Originally posted by lemondrop
can you haiku?
I have a feeling that there are lots of good haiku composers out there
wish you would post
let's have some fun for a change

rain drops echo
on the waters surface
a fish darts beneath the surface

the rooks are steady
preparing for the assault
thunder from below

You are really piling up the points there !!
Impressive !!

Is your rating really 1131 ?? 🙄

Originally posted by mghrn55
You are really piling up the points there !!
Impressive !!

Is your rating really 1131 ?? 🙄

autumn leaves fall
like incandescent tears
the proud citadel strewn across the sand