I felt the general standard of writing here (with one notable exception) was higher than in the Satanic section.
1 - 5pts - Breakdown at Tiffany's. Excellent. Writing in the second person is jarringly effective here.
2 - 3pts - Shadows. Very well written, and rather unsettling to say the least.
3 - 2pts - The Story of Extanus. A good yarn, well told.