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  1. Standard member Gatecrasher
    Whale watching
    14 Apr '10 11:39
    I felt the general standard of writing here (with one notable exception) was higher than in the Satanic section.

    1 - 5pts - Breakdown at Tiffany's. Excellent. Writing in the second person is jarringly effective here.
    2 - 3pts - Shadows. Very well written, and rather unsettling to say the least.
    3 - 2pts - The Story of Extanus. A good yarn, well told.
  2. 14 Apr '10 12:16
    1. Shadows
    2. Breakfast at Tiffanys
    3. My surrender
  3. Standard member orion25
    Art is hard
    14 Apr '10 19:45
    1.My Surrender
    2.Breakdown at Tiffany's
    3.Shadows
  4. Standard member yo its me
    watch the acid...
    14 Apr '10 20:13
    1. Hope. Fantastic and very funny, "two years training with the Farringdon Fox-Tooth Dojo".
    2. Shadows, a good read even without the hook at the end.
    3. The Story of Extanus, well written.
  5. Standard member Phlabibit
    Mystic Meg
    14 Apr '10 20:24 / 1 edit
    1. My Surrender (I love BIG CATS!)
    2. Shadows (I still see the strange things in the dark)
    3. Breakdown at Tiff's (Well written, but I didn't do it!!) 😉

    Good stuff, all! Hard to pick just 3 let alone one as best.
  6. 14 Apr '10 23:36
    1. Breakdown at Tiffanys
    2. The Story of Extanus
    3. Shadows

    Cracking reads the lot of them.
  7. 15 Apr '10 08:39 / 1 edit
    hope: made me laugh out loud. some lovely writing in this. 1st: 5 points
    my surrender: you can guess the twist early enough, i think, but this is some excellent writing. made me sad at the end 🙁 2nd: 3 points
    the story of extanus: enjoyed this. ha! guess it explains why the unicorns died out too... 3rd: 2 points
  8. Subscriber Kewpie
    since 1-Feb-07
    15 Apr '10 09:51
    1. T
    2. Hope
    3. Breakdown at Tiffany's.
  9. Standard member Bosse de Nage
    Zellulärer Automat
    15 Apr '10 12:09
    1. Extanus: most original idea and funny, although it could do with some editing ...
    2. My Surrender: most true to life
    3. Breakdown at Tiffany's
  10. 15 Apr '10 14:12
    My Surrender
    Breakdown at Tiffany's
    Shadows
  11. 15 Apr '10 16:09
    1. My Surrender
    2. Hope
    3. Breakdown at Tiffany's
  12. 17 Apr '10 07:59
    Bump for the weekenders on their own.
  13. 17 Apr '10 10:37
    1. Breakdown at Tiffany's
    2. My Surrender
    3. Shadows
  14. Standard member Gatecrasher
    Whale watching
    17 Apr '10 17:16
    No pushing in the queue, people. Stay calm and orderly and you will all get the chance to vote.
  15. 18 Apr '10 15:23
    1. Breakdown at Tiffany's
    2. My Surrender
    3. Shadows


    The Story of Extanus was quite funny but doesn't get my vote for repeatedly misspelling the word "Ark"!