Prose: No Theme

I felt the general standard of writing here (with one notable exception) was higher than in the Satanic section.

1 - 5pts - Breakdown at Tiffany's. Excellent. Writing in the second person is jarringly effective here.
2 - 3pts - Shadows. Very well written, and rather unsettling to say the least.
3 - 2pts - The Story of Extanus. A good yarn, well told.

1. Shadows
2. Breakfast at Tiffanys
3. My surrender

1.My Surrender
2.Breakdown at Tiffany's
3.Shadows

1. Hope. Fantastic and very funny, "two years training with the Farringdon Fox-Tooth Dojo".
2. Shadows, a good read even without the hook at the end.
3. The Story of Extanus, well written.

1. My Surrender (I love BIG CATS!)
2. Shadows (I still see the strange things in the dark)
3. Breakdown at Tiff's (Well written, but I didn't do it!!) 😉

Good stuff, all! Hard to pick just 3 let alone one as best.

1. Breakdown at Tiffanys
2. The Story of Extanus
3. Shadows

Cracking reads the lot of them.

hope: made me laugh out loud. some lovely writing in this. 1st: 5 points
my surrender: you can guess the twist early enough, i think, but this is some excellent writing. made me sad at the end 🙁 2nd: 3 points
the story of extanus: enjoyed this. ha! guess it explains why the unicorns died out too... 3rd: 2 points

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2. Hope
3. Breakdown at Tiffany's.

1. Extanus: most original idea and funny, although it could do with some editing ...
2. My Surrender: most true to life
3. Breakdown at Tiffany's