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  1. Standard member Gatecrasher
    Whale watching
    14 Apr '10 11:58
    1 - 5pts - Chasm. Could have left more to the imagination, but rather good, and very wicked.
    2 - 3pts - The 666 Connection. Flawed, but it has some interesting flow and energy.
    3 - 2pts - The Godspite Deal. Has merit, but I found the chirpy glibness of the suicidal hero quite detracting.

    A good turn out. Some of the writers should read their stories back to themselves, aloud.
  2. 14 Apr '10 12:13
    1. Godspite Deal
    2. Something devilish
    3. The sccubus

    A really enjoyable morning reading these thank you all 🙂
  3. Standard member Hand of Hecate
    Merciless Vagabond
    14 Apr '10 12:32
    You know, I'm constantly surprised at how good some of these submittals are. This will take some consideration.

    Do you think VR will need to make a deal with the devil to be able to figure out how to vote?
  4. Standard member orion25
    Art is hard
    14 Apr '10 17:04
    1.The Succubus
    2.Georgia Epilogue
    3.Something Devilish
  5. Standard member yo its me
    watch the acid...
    14 Apr '10 19:18
    How fab! Some really interesting reads. Very hard to pick which ones I enjoyed the most.

    1. Nightscape
    2. Georgia Epilogue
    3. The Godspite Deal


    I can't say I enjoyed Chasm but it was well written. I don't really like horror stories, espically when children are involved.
  6. 14 Apr '10 20:00
    Originally posted by yo its me
    How fab! Some really interesting reads. Very hard to pick which ones I enjoyed the most.

    1. Nightscape
    2. Georgia Epilogue
    3. The Godspite Deal


    I can't say I enjoyed Chasm but it was well written. I don't really like horror stories, espically when children are involved.
    Just out of interest, you do realise the topic was 'Satanic Prose' don't you?
  7. Standard member yo its me
    watch the acid...
    14 Apr '10 20:29
    Originally posted by Starrman
    Just out of interest, you do realise the topic was 'Satanic Prose' don't you?
    Yes! Of cause I do. It was just a bit dark for me, personal prefrence. I wasn't going to vote for it, but I did want to say something in recognition of it's creativeness.
  8. Standard member Phlabibit
    Mystic Meg
    14 Apr '10 20:33
    Originally posted by yo its me
    Yes! Of cause I do. It was just a bit dark for me, personal prefrence. I wasn't going to vote for it, but I did want to say something in recognition of it's creativeness.
    Don't feed the troll.
  9. 14 Apr '10 22:17
    Originally posted by Phlabibit
    Don't feed the troll.
    😠

    Don't make me GB your ass.
  10. 14 Apr '10 23:23
    1. The Godspite Deal
    2. The Succubus
    3. Chasm

    Ask me tomorrow and I'll probably vote differently - good quality entries all round.
  11. Standard member Hand of Hecate
    Merciless Vagabond
    15 Apr '10 03:17
    1. Georgia Epilogue - Pulled at the Southerner in me.
    2. Chasm - Disturbing if somewhat predictable.
    3. Something Devilish.
  12. 15 Apr '10 08:44
    1. nightscape - some excellent scene setting and visualisation. 5 points.
    2. something devilish. not sure about the blind man. either not needed or introduce him earlier. felt rushed at the end, but i like the general feel. again good visualisation and a nice twist with the final line. 3 points.
    3. HOW MÖTLEY CRüE BROKE MY HEART. sympathy vote? no. it had a nice (broken) heart, and appealed to me. i also happen to love bukowski so that namecheck didn't hurt... 2 points.
  13. 15 Apr '10 14:07
    1. The Succubus
    2. Something Devilish
    3. Georgia Epilogue
  14. 15 Apr '10 16:13
    1. Something Devilish
    2. The Godspite Deal
    3. Nightscape
  15. Standard member rbmorris
    Vampyroteuthis
    16 Apr '10 23:03
    1.The 666 Connection
    2.HOW MÖTLEY CRüE BROKE MY HEART
    3.Georgia Epilogue

    Honorable mention to "Something Devilish". I thought it started well, but the ending could have used some work.

    Great work, everyone!