SEVERUS: The Black Caesar

One link to rule them all!

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@benjamin-barker said
One link to rule them all!

viewbook.at/severus

There are a few rough spots. Do you have an editor to check grammar?

@HandyAndy Yes, it has been professional proof read. I noticed a couple of typos recently though, things like names slip through.

@benjamin-barker said
@HandyAndy Yes, it has been professional proof read. I noticed a couple of typos recently though, things like names slip through.

There are plural subjects with singular verbs. I found two on Page 1:

"... a couple of children followed by a rowdy, barking dog runs down the street."

"... the short swords at their sides warns anyone who might think of causing a ruckus."

@HandyAndy

The boy almost loses his footing as a couple of children followed by a rowdy, barking dog runs down the street. He stops his wheelbarrow to let a large cart pulled by oxen pass. Upon the cart, the boy can see hundreds of fresh fish. His stomach rumbles as he watches a couple of stray dogs walk behind the cart, hoping for a morsel of food to fall from it.
Turning his attention back to his wheelbarrow, the boy car- ries on walking. A few Roman soldiers pass him. Their legion armour glistens in the sun and the short swords at their sides warns anyone who might think of causing a ruckus.

@Duchess64

Nope - and neither did https://www.proofreader-perfect.com when I paid for their proof reading services.

I am not interested in debating grammar nazi pendants and their followers - if you have nothing positive to add to this post then please stop trolling it.

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@ponderable said
All in all the reading was enjoyable.

So, your reading experience wasn't marred by poor grammar then. 😉