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Ladies and dudes of the Culture Forum! Less than 17 hours late, I shall now post the entries! They will be posted anonymously,

Rules for voting:

1. If you entered, please vote. It would be lame to have more entries than votes.

2. As is the custom, vote by listing your three favourite entries, from "third-favouritest" to "most-favouritest". As is also the custom, three apples are awarded to a poem for each first place vote, two apples for each second place vote, and a single orange for each third place vote. The judges are skilled at comparing apples to oranges.

3. You have two weeks from the posting of the last entry to make your votes.

4. Vote in this thread. Only votes here will be counted. Please do not post anything else here; I will start a separate thread for Verse Competition Discussion.

5. Discussion and critique of the verse is encouraged (it is sort of the whole point!), but discussion of who wrote what is not allowed until voting finishes. However, please use the discussion thread, and not this one, which is just for votes.

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Through a Glass Darkly
(September 15, 1963, January 20, 2009)

A gathering like any Sunday morning
Days end four little girls dead, a time for mourning….in America
Shattered glass and Jesus crushed everywhere in the rubble
Why this? In order to be humble?
A hymnbook burning bright providing the flames of hell
One day a story in need of a bell
Now ascend the steps of time
Two little girls in a new morning
Colored as the four before, but now soaring
Now granted the wisdom of time
We read the Scripture sublime
“Through a glass darkly, but one day face to face”
These are the times that cross space
“Understood and we understand”
Lion lying down with the lamb

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Tuesday Afternoon

Darkness crashes
unexpectedly
Rain collides
with the tin awning
announcing its arrival
The wind herds
the rain's scent through
window cracks
followed by
Silence
as snow begins its search
for places to land

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Nobody made you to post in all forums

Out of the faceless noisy crowd
Two of them stood side by side
Holding hands they boldly cried
"WE ARE THE SILENT MAJORITY!"

"We don't like it here not one little bit
You're all FOUL mouthed and full of S(p)IT!"
And so began this epic saga
Of good versus evil, clan rivalry DRAMA

And round and round and round they go
the trolls are everywhere you know

Kicking a wheelchair out of the way
a monstrous man makes his way
to the front, the front of the crowd
"We don't like CHEATS" he seems to say

But he coughed as he said it and nobody knows
what his words were as he rubbed his nose
Maybe he didn't say "don't" maybe he did
It's certain (as far as we know) that he knew what he did

And round and round and round they go
the trolls are everywhere you know

Ironman left and then Exe too,
they took down the list so now nobody new
can know what anyone old used to know
about what went on in the past too

More cheats are found on a daily basis
but the site gets better and better despite this
bit of a slur on an otherwise marvellous place
... if only there weren't any trolls

And round and round and round they go
the trolls are everywhere you know

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Walter's Perfect Phucctoy



Walter seemed a good man,

But things turned very wrong

When Walter's new obsession

Just wouldn't play along

See Walter liked his women

Submissive, not too strong

Doting to his every need,

No mind to speak too long.



Clara was a beauty,

But life had dealt her shi+,

Working poles she earned some cash,

Enough to start legit.

One last night, she'd told the boss,

To draw the mongrels in,

Walter stood among the crowd,

As Clara flaunted skin.



Closing time came none too soon,

For Clara's cramping feet,

Clicking heels to her car,

Bare legs in need of heat.

Sprung from shadows, in her face,

Was Walter's smile sweet,

Politely he suggested

They plan to later meet.



Nervous laughter cutting in,

Sweet Clara did decline,

Just as foreseen, Walter thought,

As he produced the twine,

Precut lengths, two in his fist,

As Clara's keys did shine,

In light too dim to find the lock

Before his punch found spine.



Violently he took her down

Face smashed into cement

Wrists and ankles quickly tied

Too shocked to scream, then sent

Into his trunk, pain screeching now

Her body badly bent

Walter slammed the lid down fast

Into the night she went.



~





Slowly Clara woke

And quickly was alert

Memory still quite intact

She feared she might be hurt

Closed lids slowly opened

Scraping eyes with dirt

Focus landing hazily

On Walter's bloodied shirt



Panic searing back now

Her body urged to flee

No reaction from her legs

Her eyes shot down to see

Signaling her arms to help

Her efforts to get free

Nothing working, she can't move

Pure immobility



Peeling dry lips from the gum

And working her throat clear

Tries to speak, to ask him Why.

Her eye lets loose a tear

Feeling sick with terror as

He turns to lean in near

Thick scream building in her throat

He whispers in her ear :



Sweet and darling Clara

You should not be awake

I've finished for the most part,

But have some left to take.

Your limbs are true perfection

And came off with a shake

After the cuts were cauterized

And each bone I did break



Your velvet tongue was trying

It took me quite a while

Don't you fear though Clara

Don't love you for your smile

Teeth cracked out quite simply

Remnants smoothed by file

Vocal chords sliced tenderly

You've stitches by the mile



~



Walter's perfect fucctoy

She wailed so silently

Watched as Walter grabbed his shears

From close proximity

Silken strands of golden hair

Hacked off quite hastily

Clippers mowing to her scalp

His razor swept cleanly



Screaming for her mama

And a God long forgot

Clara hung from Walter's wall

Her hook through a strong knot

Shears replaced by brass handle

Two sterile bolts he got

Installation holes predrilled

After the numbing shot



Which must be wearing thin by now

As hours since have passed

Love handle screwed to gleaming head

Her eyes now fully glassed

But vital signs are looking good

For years and years she'll last

Stepping back to eye his prize

Yes, this work's unsurpassed.



Lube the tube and down her throat

Her feeding guaranteed

No need for a catheter

Or s(ch)it-bag to impede

Upon his freedom to make use

Depending on his need

Of each and every hole she has

Oh phucc, he'll make her bleed!



From his basement work table

He pulls her royal gown

A bag hand sewn from thick canvas

He bought last week in town

Sized just right with zippered front

Two airholes, painted frown,

She should be very comfortable

Until the swelling's down.

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The Wood of Humanity

The cedars of Lebanon were known to be tall and straight
The mustard plant of Jesus of much to make
Kudzu on a hillside from the Orient
Ash from Pennsylvania on baseball bats spent
The grand oak that is run through a lathe
The mahogany echoing the notes that are played
The maple bearing the sweet sap of winter
The swampy cypress grainy and full of splinters
A small green fir pointing to the heavens
Symbolic of the star which for all it beckons
But my tree is broken at the top and holds no star
A reminder of grace gone afar
An ornament here an ornament there
Masking the pain that I must bear
Why is this tree talking to me?
It is telling me I am its seed
To grow in glory even in disfigurement
Is this for me God’s covenant?

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The beggar

You sit down there a big disgrace
a translucent look upon your face
a bag of garbage to be swept away
when next the cleaner comes your way
and people smile as they pass you by
and don't dare look 'case you catch their eye
and they'll have to see this heap of trash
and they're all quite sure you've got a stash
somewhere ...
And when that wheel of fortune spun
and it turned right round and a starter's gun
set off a crack! and a spark begun
in someone's belly
- a mass of jelly that grew and grew
then out popped you -
did you ask for this?
I don't think so.
You weren't to know.

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The Blanket Out of Time and Space

The Blanket Out of Time and Out of Space
advances by degrees as it unrolls
across the psychic sofa, then the face
exposes, by the eyes' infected coals,
the presence of the Blanket, and extols
the flat or nauseous notions that replace
and smother, sleeping, values, lusts and goals.

The Blanket Out of Time, surrounds the space
which heretofore the sleeper sought to fill
with varied things the Blanket will replace:
the Pillow of Love and the Duvet of Will,
even Perceptual Linen, until,
impossibly heavy reticular lace
binds and renders all it clutches still.

The Blanket Out of Time, as nearest Space
can be conquered for a time by force of mind.
Discipline and chemistry embrace;
launch the sleeper in impeccably design'd
spacecraft, sent to pierce the nets that bind!
As funding fails the boldest rocket race,
this mission never leaves the bed behind.

The Blanket Out of Time, as deepest Space
is to anthracite as black to white, in shade,
and by this darkness often will efface
the wretched vulgar rope and razorblade,
until the sleeper's final card is played
and the Blanket flies away without a trace
and leaves the sleeper morbidly decayed.

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Belgrade 1999

Again the dreaded dark replaces day
No children play. The city streets lie bare
Wait for sirens' wails to show the way
An awsome, threatening silence fills the air.

Like rats from shattered homes they crawl
Tired eyes made active, keen, awake
Underground where lethal bombs can't fall
A source of solace take.

Is this a grave, a concrete tomb in which to die?
As above the sound of thunder shakes the ground
Counting hours and minutes, huddled close they lie
In wonder if by daybreak they'll be found.

Latch on, take aim, strike, a hit!
The pilot's eyes shine with pride and joy
A tyrant's stance may move, may shift a bit
The cost? Another bloodied, orphaned boy.

And when in time the missiles run their course
The screaming stops, the wailing fades away
Will we wait, pause, stop to seek a cause
Or just rebuild to fight another day?

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Flying

Legs pumping in rhythm I'm flying through the air
pedals pushing the wind through my hair
along the road like a thought

Ignoring the mirrors she sits in comfort
oblivious to all else but
her wrong turns that took her there

The open road and I'm flying through the air
At peace and without a care
till traffic approaches - a jam

She's wondering Is this where I am,
trying to read a scrawled map in a jam
I'll turn around there

Overtaking the cars I'm flying through the air
the parked up drivers stop and stare
and wish they weren't stuck

She puts down her foot - such luck!
I'm flying through the air - Oh FVCK!
The wheel squeals round

Flying through the air ... I'm on the ground
There isn't a sound
except the dull echo of a sickening thud

Oblivion flickers like a worn out video
The inside of an ambulance ... The fitting of an orAnge neck brace ..
Fragments of faces and broken conversations ...
Pain, X-rays and Cat scans ...
Doctors and Nurses busy and efficient
Being left alone ...
Tears

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Inaugural Address

Hear Ye! Hear Ye! One and All!
My brothaz on the National Mall
And all the white folks gathered ‘round,
Mulatos too, half white, half brown…

The White House, building of great fame
Shall now be known by its new name –
The Crib is what it will now be called
There’s some new brown paint found on the walls

Not graffiti, not vandalism
But a portrait of the freshest presidentialism
Who’s that brown face in the shiny gold frame?
Barak Obama – remember the name

Put in office by the BWA
This shall go down as our proudest day
Above all that our glorious clan has done
Our proudest feat – a presidency won

Things ‘round here is about to change
No more Dixie, or Home on the Range
America the Beautiful, a song way to whack
Sing a new national anthem: America the Black!

From this day on, year out and year in
We shall be led by a man of great skin
Pass the 40 around, on the ground we shall pour
A few sips for the white presidents of yore.

Brothaz hail Obama, straight from the Motherland!
It’s a black thing, you wouldn’t understand
If you too white, then I’m sure you won’t
Better aks somebody if you don’t!

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