Originally posted by AmauroteThat entire first paragraph was one sentence. You should work on that. It's hard to read.
Although I'm well to the left of New Labour, I must admit that I'm quite looking forward to Gordon Brown, and I do think Tony Blair has been a good PM, at least in terms of his domestic record and when judged against the parameters of what any party politician operating under our parliamentary system can realistically achieve: the problem is that the Left i ...[text shortened]... ering to slash corporation tax, which is hardly the stuff equalitarian dreams were made of.
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Originally posted by AThousandYoungNo, it was two. Thanks for your interest, but as long as the grammar is correct, I never take other people's advice on style seriously - I can't stand lazy writers who use a full stop where a semi-colon would work more effectively.
That entire first paragraph was one sentence. You should work on that. It's hard to read.
